| Reviews for A Prank Gone Wrong Gone Right |
|---|
Rebmul chapter 1 . 7/15 i kinda want to know what happend to heather probaly knocked up and on the street she should tell her boss's wife hes fucking her i want to see more fireworks |
Wahey chapter 1 . 2/4 This was fuckkking amaaaaziing! YOu have a way with words my friend! THank you for this beautiful masterpiece! Keep writing! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2019 Super hot story and really like all your other Hiccup and Astrid (httyd) stories. Hope you can do more of them and a couple of them with Heather! Keep up the fantastic work and hope u add a new story soon! |
wolfofeternalnight chapter 1 . 11/7/2017 Awesome oneshot |
Grizzly98 chapter 1 . 9/6/2017 Omgs! I absolutely loved this one shot. |
Kate chapter 1 . 7/16/2017 The reason why I don't like Heather is because she is a Mary Sue self-insert. She is an original fanon character with a modern name inserted into the HTTYD world where she gets to be a dragon rider like the rest. It's as if a fangirl would have written herself into the story and made herself the "bestest" and most perfect character with the "bestest" and most special dragon. Blah. Her portrayal in fanfiction is even worse. Her body is constantly modified to fit the authors personal preference. Heather is small chested in canon as an adult but look at the amount of fanboys giving her a boob job on here. She is definitely hard to take seriously as a character and the fans certainly don't help the matters. |
To Itchy Armpit chapter 1 . 7/16/2017 You are such a hypocrite. Eret and Astrid can work just as well as any of the pairs you have mentioned. It doesn't even have to be cheating. And it's so funny that you say they are not into each other and then bring up Hiccup and Heather who have been depicted as siblings by DreamWorks and the RTTE writers since the beginning. As far as we are concerned, Astrid and Eret are not anything like that. Also, people don't ship Erestrid because they hate Astrid. What a ridiculous thing to say. Most of the Erestrid shippers love Astrid and wants her to be more independant as a character. The only reason you ship Eret and Heather is to keep Eret away from Astrid. You don't even want Heather near Astrid even though you claim to love her. It's because Astrid is not allowed to be with anyone but Hiccup according to everyone on here and.. basically everywhere. I'm still failing to grasp the exact reason behind it. |
Itchy Armpit chapter 1 . 7/3/2017 Could you do a writing prompt between Eret and Heather? No one does them at all! I think they're perfect. No Eretstrid because everyone makes them OOC, especially Astrid. She's not the cheating kind. Especially after having a deep relationship with Hiccup for the past several years. And Eret and Astrid weren't even into each other so I don't understand why some people ship them. Unless they hate Hiccstrid or Astrid specifically. I think most of them do it because Eret's better than Snotlout so they ship her with Eret in order to avoid Hiccstrid. If you do it, that's fine. But NO HICCUP! Also no-go on the Toothstrid. That's just gross. Also in reality, Toothless's size and strength could very easily destroy her insides and give her internal bleeding. She would've been dead eventually from that. Just saying. Sorry to hit you with biology. Also could you do more Hiccup/Heather fanfics? No one does them at all and I find them to be awesome, preferably if Astrid wasn't into Hiccup or if Hiccup met Heather before Astrid had the change of heart in HTTYD 1. Maybe in a Modern AU writing prompt, Hiccup and Heather are step-siblings by marriage - by Hiccup's father and Astrid's mother - and they fall each other and want to be with each other, though they have to keep their relationship a secret because their family won't like it and their friends will judge them for wanting to be with each other. But then Hiccup and Heather decide to move away so they can live a life together without judgment or condemnation. They're 19 or 20. NOTE TO HEATHER-HATERS : Why do you hate Heather? Don't you remember that Heather's Hiccstrid's main supporter and fangirl? And she's with Fishlegs now and is Astrid's best friend! Also no Heather/Astrid. They're JUST friends! Heather gave Astrid flowers as a thank you for Astrid lending her her axe: Astrid NEVER gives ANYONE her axe - not even Hiccup unless it's for repairs. Astrid giving anyone her ax is a HUGE display of trust and was able to do so with Heather because she's her BGF (best girl friend). |
Wet Nurse chapter 1 . 7/3/2017 By the way, I'm anonymous but call me Wet Nurse. FYI, I'm the owner of the review that just got on your feed. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2017 Writing prompt: Could you do a PT 2 of Hiccup the Virile? That was fun. I loved Heather/Hiccup/Astrid. Only this time, it's very early in the morning and Astrid's suckling her and Hiccup's 6-month old child after it woke them up from its crying, and Heather's 7-months pregnant with her first. And Heather's feeling horny so Hiccup obliges her and nibbles, bites, licks, and suckles her large breasts for awhile before he mates with her in the doggy position. Astrid meanwhile finished feeding the baby and returns to the bedroom, to find them recovering from their high. She then turns horny and decides to ride Hiccup and snog him to death. After they do that, Heather and Hiccup then suckle, nibble, and lick Astrid's breasts and she nurses them while Heather fingers Astrid's clit and Hiccup's doing the same to Heather's, and both women cum. Then they do it again, only with Heather's and Astrid's roles reversed and it's Heather that's nursing her lovers, Astrid fingering Heather's clit, and Hiccup fingering Astrid's, and both women cum again, and the lovers have had their fill of breast milk. Then Hiccup comes to mate with them again - him and Astrid mating on his lap. And Hiccup mating with Heather on their sides, due to her condition. Then they all go to bed snuggled up against each other. The end. |
xan-merrick chapter 1 . 6/5/2017 as always enjoyed your new story and look forward to your next ones |
Vivi-ntvg chapter 1 . 6/3/2017 This was a very enjoyable read :D |
roach890 chapter 1 . 5/10/2017 As usual... another great fic. Keep em 'coming' Pun very intended. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2017 Hot and sweet, love it! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/5/2017 i am so happy SINCE I HATE HATE HEATHER no offence |