| Reviews for The Geist Within |
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Lord Asmodeus chapter 10 . 7/18 This is completely incorrect tags; Naruto is as far from an anti-hero as possible. If that wasn't enough, the genre is clearly parody. There's no element of serious story-telling at all. It's of poor taste to mislead readers. |
Imperial-samaB chapter 36 . 7/18 Nicely done. I can't wait to see what you do next |
StrongGuy159 chapter 36 . 7/17 Cool chapter Part 1 continue please. |
AspiringWriterInWayOverHisHead chapter 5 . 7/14 This story is kind of inconsistent, you had Naruto himself explain all about Warpers to Nara a few chaps ago and now all of a sudden he's asking him how he knows about warp stuff AND a warper representative supposedly visited him? But you let nothing about this shine through nor did you even mention how WarperNaruto found out about it? Also people are just wayyyyy too underhyped for all the weird shit he's doing. Is this a crackfic? I didn't think it was at first ... |
DSX62415 chapter 35 . 6/23 Those 2 just refuse to die. |
StrongGuy159 chapter 35 . 6/22 Cool chapter Part 1 continue please. |
Samthman chapter 34 . 5/15 Nice chapter and story keep up the good work |
DSX62415 chapter 34 . 5/15 Chances are that one of the reasons for Orochimaru bailing is due to PTSD. |
Imperial-samaB chapter 34 . 5/15 Well this was hard to keep track of. Oh well that's fine |
StrongGuy159 chapter 34 . 5/15 Cool chapter continue please. |
Samthman chapter 33 . 4/8 Nice story keep up the good work |
StrongGuy159 chapter 33 . 3/21 Cool chapter continue please. |
DSX62415 chapter 33 . 3/21 Figured TenTen would make a DOOM gun at some point, and chances are that she'll be using it in the botched Sound/Sand invasion. |
Imperial-samaB chapter 33 . 3/21 That was funny. Well done |
Primus2021 chapter 9 . 3/19 Jus a or Grass is where Karin Uzumaki lived before the Konoha Chuunin Exams, and before she began living in Ot o or Sound. I wonder if Naruto will be coming back with her and if she'll be a sister, cousin or wife to him. |