This story is so goooood :3 Please keep updating, we need more storys like this

They kissed! 39 chapters and they kissed! I can't help but squeal finaly. The sasuino slowburn was killing me. I loved how Ino took a stand and she's so awesome. I really hope we get to see her doing some badass action soon! Sasuino needs more screentime! I would'nt say no to a jealous sasuke and sadistic ino!

I stumbled upon this story while trying to find something that offered an interesting plot. When I read this was a prequel I had thought that New Generation was a story of yours, but found that not to be the case.

I see that one arc has ended, but another begins as the team will face more. I hope to see more of the other's strengths as you continue. There are some showcasing their skills more than others, but if the story continues I can see some getting their limelight and others will, I hope, get some later.

There are a few phrases or words you use a lot (I do that as well), I would suggest using the thesaurus a bit to find alternatives and give your description and dialogue an added layer.

You showcase different characters perspectives on events and, while I don't always agree with the perspectives, I applaud you for that. Temari believed Ino was being a snot, but I saw it as her getting compliments from her boys - something that seems rather natural amongst those three. That is an example, it's good to add layers to the characters that they're people and have their own minds on something.

I found myself a bit eh about Saizo, but it does add depth to the story and the fact that there is going to be someone bigger and stronger after the first, pushing our ninjas to get stronger. Which, I hope, is what is happening.

There is some OOcness, but these characters are meant to change over time. In the 'Last Movie' we only got a snippet and you have a world that kinda uses some of that story as a basis, but you're creating a whole different world where Sasuke is staying in the village, working from the shadows. Naruto and Sakura are dating. Hinata amd Kiba are finding themselves towards each other. They jumped head first, but you made up for the weird leap earlier by them admitting that it was a mistake and they want a real start at it.

Tenten and Lee are a bit surprising to me. I found Tenten a little harsh, but I can understand that frustration of wanting consideration. It is never fun when the relationship feels one sided and you feel like you're making all the concessions.

Ino amd Sasuke seem loke an interesting pair, but I am glad that whole Ino might still care for Sasuke she will not put up with bs from him. Just like he can call her out too. I feel like this latest chapter is that step forward, but perhaps it will have reprecussions, outside the usual, because they just made out with Sasuke's dead body right there.

I kinda want to get a look inside Sasuke's head right now.

I find myself highly interested on the story, while some parts seem off, it is still compelling. You do a good job at writing out the scene and bringing the action. For someone's first time doing romance you're doing a good job.

Thank you for this story and I eagerly await to see what you do next. Keep up the awesome writing.

I think your understanding of shikamaru's character is off but regardless at least you kept his relationship with temari

well that was an interesting chapter poor Hyuga's though as for Kiba make Naruto beat the shit out of that WEAK PATHETIC Piece of Excrement i mean Naruto could kill that pathetic joke of a ninja with his eyes closed both hands tied behind his back who gives a shit about Kiba he's nothing making that prick walk all over Naruto yea slag off Sasgay i hardly care but come on make Naruto beat the living daylights out of him u making Naruto seem like a JOKE and seriously Shino keeping Naruto back yea right like he could

well this chapter was interesting huh can't wait for more

Wow this really deserves more attention. I hope you keep writing more.

that was quite interesting surprised Sasuke didn't mention when he heard that Karin was from the Uzumaki Clan about Naruto being an Uzumaki also Sai, Ino or Yamato never mentioned it either

well that was an interesting chapter the plot thickens

Illogical sub-plots, OoC characters, an over powered OC Uchiha bad guy with a bit of a predictable motivation and sterotypical gimmick, and I see a lot of phrases used more than once. You used 'Thought silently in his/her head' and other simillar variations a lot, for example. My advice is to vary your speech a bit (I have trouble with this too, tbh) and try to reel back on the Naruto Fanfic Sterotypes, such as an OP Uchiha OC that hates Sasuke for vauge reasons about childhood stuff. As a reader, I and others I'm sure, enjoy different content and one of the most common used post 4th war themes I see is introducing a Uchiha bad guy. Sure they make convienent bad guys given their history, but it seems stale after a while. Also I would personally suggest cutting down on the OoC actions a bit, as it seems to put some readers off. Like, I'm all for subtle changes over time to fit the cannon divergences, but Hinata suddenly stops being shy and jumps Kiba's bones out of the blue? That's a bit much and I didn't feel like it was explained out and justified that well. Maybe after a few months of Kiba slowly getting her to build confidence, then having a push from Kurenai, Ino, or someone to get her to go for Kiba and finally boost her self esteem up high. It just seemed rushed and out of place. However I do like the idea of Sasuke being out in a specialized ANBU team instead of a slap on the wrist and a 'Oh, sasuke. Go walk around the world a bit with no penalty.' That was a good idea to implement. All in all, it's an decent story, with room for improvement. Keep it up!

well that was great love NaruSaku best pairing ever man great Lemon can't wait for more NaruSaku lemons

well that was a rather amusing chapter Konohamaru is sometimes just as clueless as Naruto still Kiba's just jealous that he's a joke compared to Naruto

does sasuke not have ems and rinegan he also seems to keep getting pushed around by yugao

Although I love some good smut here and there...I feel like Hinata felt a little bit OOC, it just feel right to me how she was acting...but I enjoyed the chapter either way.

well that was interesting can't wait for more