Reviews for What Comes Next
Gmp1000 chapter 12 . 5/26/2017
God damn it I'm so fucking excited to see how Swain will retaliate!
Gmp1000 chapter 11 . 5/23/2017
The dunk master! I was wondering when he'd show funny thing is that I was thinking that again might still be there as a plot twist. I'm glad he is not.
Gmp1000 chapter 10 . 5/23/2017
Damn, you really went the distance with the feels this chapter. I really love these elements of angst, self-loathing, and hope.
Gmp1000 chapter 1 . 5/21/2017
Riven wouldn't be able to handle those two if they both just gagged her with their cum-soaked panties and double strapon stuffed her poor abused love-holes till she was filled to the brim. :3
Gmp1000 chapter 9 . 5/20/2017
Awe that's cute! I'm happy Riven can feel more comfortable when she has Ire to cuddle with.

Maybe in your next fic Irelia could tie Riven up and force her to watch her and Ahri fuck and then just have Irelia finger Ahri's snatch inches away from Riven's face. Irelia would make Ahri squirt on Riven's face. But Riven wouldn't even be allowed to lick her lips. That would be such a sad fic for Riven. XD
Gmp1000 chapter 8 . 5/20/2017
"Now we wait"?
Obvious foreshadowing of Omega Squad Teemo coming in to assist Riven and Leblanc in removing Swain from power. I'm glad to see best girl has a plan for her and her Irelia. c:
1Secret3 chapter 7 . 5/16/2017
Please update!
This fanfic is really good!
Guest chapter 7 . 5/5/2017
Hi there !
Being hated by your "students" must be a bit sad for Riven. At least, she just has to tell them to attack her if she want them to fight seriously ;-).
But I hope Riv' won t feed Swain too much, it s difficult to handle that ยท.
Have a nice day !
Elhixir chapter 4 . 5/1/2017
don't lie to her riven ! enjoying the sequel a lot. loving ur fast updates with ur stories man
Gmp1000 chapter 4 . 5/1/2017
Don't do it! :O
Aninum chapter 3 . 4/29/2017
Man, i love this sequel. Chapters a bit longer and will be perfect!
midf3kar69 chapter 1 . 4/29/2017
tbh i kinda like the sequel better than the original story but their both good, i kinda expe ted the soldiers to do more than gossip about riven tho,but i like how this story is going
Gmp1000 chapter 3 . 4/29/2017
It really bugs me when people enjoy something and then do not leave reviews.
Reviews are often all people have to inspired them onwards!
Anyway, I actually like where this story looks to be heading. It seems odd to me that the soldiers wouldn't want to have any advantage they can get against the Noxians. However, I can understand their discontentment with learning from someone who, a year ago, was killing their people. Riven suffers for her Noxian pride now.

"Do not let your pride blind you"
-Master Yi 2009
TSM BloodSplash chapter 3 . 4/29/2017
If it's even possible, this sequel is as good if not better than the previous story
Gmp1000 chapter 2 . 4/29/2017
:3 I like the training scenario a lot actually it would be an interesting difference in cultures.
The sex is great as sex should be. :)