| Reviews for Heartbeat |
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agosto-13 chapter 1 . 5/2/2017 I love it! I'm torn between asking for a sequel, or just letting you leave it here because the ending is already perfect; perfectly sums up what I imagine Kara is feeling during Alex's kidnapping and subsequent finding. More Danvers sisters fics please! :D |
detectiveben chapter 1 . 4/28/2017 yes. well done, well written. sums up pretty well the rage that Kara would feel and express if Alex got hurt. |
Supergirl Fan chapter 1 . 4/28/2017 YAY! I LOVED Unknown Number so I am super happy that you decided to write this as well. I'm really excited for 2x19 and this story may well get me through til Monday. It's awesome, Kara's fear and anger are so well written! Please continue! Pretty please? :) |
Anna chapter 1 . 4/28/2017 I like your story! |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/28/2017 Wow ! That was really beautiful ! Keep telling stories, it's great ;) |
supersanvers chapter 1 . 4/29/2017 This is just beautiful. Yes please to more chapters! |
LisaDavidson chapter 1 . 4/29/2017 Oooooh shit this was awesome! I love stories where Kara loses control for a bit. I always imagined Kara with a lot of rage under that happy-go-lucky facade. I wish they had explored that more on the show. Another chapter of Kara seeing alex in hospital and having to come to terms with what she did when she thought alex was dead. I would love to see Alex's reaction to what Kara did. I imagine she would be abit surprised. I don't know if she would know about that rage inside. Anyways, getting off topic. The story was great ! I really could do with more Danvers sisters love :) |
Caroline988 chapter 1 . 4/29/2017 I completely understand you. I saw the promo and I just can't wait to watch the episode. Alex is my favorite character and the dynamic between her and Kara is something I love. Your story is great and how I imagine the rescue scene will develop but adding Kara's interest on her sister's heartbeat is lovely. Continue if you want this story is great |
afret2010 chapter 1 . 4/29/2017 Great story. I think it's kind of perfect the way it is, but hey, I never say no to another chapter! |
Pineapplejuicerules chapter 1 . 4/28/2017 Dude, this is fantastic. This is such a great prediction of how the show might turn out. And the way you wrote...it was like I was right there. Amazing job. If you want to, please continue it. |