*Cue Corporate Commander laugh in Aliens: Colonial Marines* What, if I laugh, it's a good novel.

I liked the one-shot!

Ooo la la very nicely done. There's never enough Lancaster lemons for us poor shippers to read. I thoroughly enjoyed reading the buildup of them meeting in the rain, then cuddling, before some nice steamy sex came in. Great job.

I really like the stories that play with the concept of rainy day, and this has not been the exception. Very good.
The sex scene served its purpose but I think you can improve on that. So I certainly encourage you to keep doing more.
Extra points for labeling Ruby and Jaune as main characters (with the previous fic I was lucky that I left to put Lancaster in the search engine)
Thanks for this and I'll be aware if you decide to do more :)

Please more Lancaster Lemons. The rain really helped set the scene

Much unlike a lemon, I found this story to be very sweet.

Lancaster is so cute and sweet. Good job

Really loved this! I would love another Lancaster Lemon!

Surprised this hasn't gotten any review until now... Well I can say I enjoyed and liked this, in my book any Lancaster like this is appreciated, on a side note this is the first "happy" or non hurt comfort lancaster I've read where they are both active hunters at the same time, it's usually Jaune the one that stays at home for some or other reason whether still a hunter or not... Kinda find that interesting.