Reviews for The Girl Who Saw - Not Alone
Aylaa Grace chapter 42 . 4/12
Thanks for the update
mylifeislol chapter 3 . 6/6/2019
"Aunt Dromeda"? Andromeda? Brilliant.
EdTheBeast chapter 1 . 5/14/2019
Sounds like an excellent story!
bowers.larry chapter 1 . 1/29/2019
Sounds okay I will continue. However one of the biggest turnoffs i have when searching for a story is "What if". Be positive, don't ask for approval! Harry had a almost sibling, whose mother dies alongside James and Lily. Thanks for listening to my mini-rant.
Thank you for sharing your time, talents and imagination with us readers.
Bonitalapaz chapter 20 . 10/20/2017
Hey, At first I thought it was going to be a very interesting story were harry had a older sister and things will be better for him, I think marinas caracter is contradictory she doesnt trust dumbeldore but at the same time thinks he is god and can decide things, and I cant belive they left harry with the dursleys even knowing they are abusing him (in canon they know they dont like harry but they dont know the abuse) another think I cant understad is that marina and carmen have been traing since they were 5 and even after harry comes back to the wizarding world they dont train him, he is the main character and its like he is a secondary one, he is the one who has to beat voldemort and they dont train him or even explain things to him, sirius is free and things are worse than in canon, there are aurors and a lot of people with trainging and they dont even recapture one of the death eaters, everything is happening like in canon but just exagerated, well sorry for the bad review I dont know why but every chapter I got more angry and like you said this is your story if you dont like it dont read it, so thats what I going to do, dont continue to read it. Thanks for the try.
Airiles'Malfoy chapter 1 . 10/7/2017
YES ALL THE LOVE.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/29/2017
Sorry, but I'm not liking all the oc characters (except Marina)
Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2017
Marina..really? Callisto would have been better as a first name.
Airiles'Malfoy chapter 25 . 9/20/2017
please more chapter. please
monsta-starr chapter 23 . 9/12/2017
Seriously Skeeter! I was about to have some Marina and David moment and u ruined it. Damn u woman! WTF!? I cant wait till Marina whoops ur ass u crazy woman.

Next chapter please *puppy eyes*
monsta-starr chapter 22 . 9/11/2017
Awesome story. Love the chapters with the fighting scenes it was epic. Cant wait when you do the war scenes but lets not move so fast cause i dont want this story to end just yet. Finally some moving on the relationship of David and Marina and Cameron and Elias. Whoo more chapters ~
WolfWoman86 chapter 20 . 9/9/2017
I just found this story tonight. It's really good. I can't wait to see what happens next.
monsta-starr chapter 18 . 9/7/2017
This is an amazing story. Love how you changed it somewhat for ur OCs. I'm glad Harry got free of that household. Please update soon. I would love to see what comes next. Also when is David and Marina gonna see they have feelings for one another. I cant wait for it. Lol ~
Gryffinclawpufferin chapter 16 . 9/1/2017
So what feline does she turn into? Or did I miss that lol
chc91776 chapter 13 . 6/28/2017
Good story thus far... only pairing i can see Harry with that makes sense is Marina.. if its Hermione or Ginny ill smash my head against a wall.
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