| Reviews for SIS (Smoldering, Immense, Shaft) |
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Sheena19 chapter 2 . 7/8 So now I’m in suspense lol. I thought Edward was the new captain and I also thought Edward was learning sign language for Bella lol. I’m sure Alice knows though. Being with Jasper, she must have seen a photo of his brother! |
Sheena19 chapter 1 . 7/8 Absolutely loved this chapter! I need to party with Rose and Tanya |
CharlotteCrandal chapter 13 . 7/5 I really enjoyed this story. I'm supposed to be packing for our vacations, but I read this in one go, because I couldn't put it down. Thank you. |
PreciousJuls chapter 13 . 7/4 Second time reading this and it’s still fantastic! |
Marliarna chapter 3 . 7/1 Friendly suggestion-needs an edit, I think you meant carbon monoxide! |
vampirelady13 chapter 2 . 6/2 I think Edward should not have lied to Bella about who he is. Yes his name was Masen but now it is not I would not give him the time of day when I found out he lied. If he is going to lie about something like that then how are you supposed to trust him. Bella is sure will not care about him lying. |
RosieRathbone chapter 1 . 4/28 I'm really interested in how this story is going to go. I love how gentle this Edward seems with Bella, even if their first encounter was pretty raunchy lol. Looking forward to reading more! |
jupiter2005 chapter 13 . 4/27 Glad things ended great for Bella and Edward. Also happy that they have a cute family. Keep up the good work. |
pinkshoes81 chapter 13 . 4/9 Loved this story, thank you for posting x |
Nannyjojo chapter 13 . 3/15 Loved it so much. Thank you for sharing |
Nannyjojo chapter 12 . 3/15 Ha. Jake screwed himself over. Twat. Lover the dance and the proposal. Just so them. |
Nannyjojo chapter 11 . 3/15 Well she sure showed the doubter. Sure she opened some eyes at the police station too. |
Nannyjojo chapter 10 . 3/15 Jake is a tool. Can't believe he is still trying to get out of it by lying. |
Nannyjojo chapter 9 . 3/15 Got to love Charlie. Think the girls took that news well. |
Nannyjojo chapter 8 . 3/15 Haha. They are love Bella. Jacob had best fear for his like. I think esme had good intentions. She's knows that bella is the apple of her sons eye. |