sniff sniff
i love it

I had to re-read this to figure out that he was getting akumatized.

Ooh! Now this. This is interesting. It's like the Adrien version of Chat Blanc, or something? Reminds me of Trouble in White. And I take it Marinette has confessed and Adrien admitted he didn't like her like that? This is going to be /very/ interesting.

awwwww so sweet (:

Nicely done

it's still left a bitter taste in the end :')
even though the hurt one is not our sunshine boy. it's just ...
good one :)

Will you create a chapter for ladybug?

I wouldn't call this a REAL short fic...

more bitter than sweet but still sweet enough. the two oblivious idiots! I love how it took him that long to realize he'd become a akuma! if he knows miraculous wielders can be akumatized that's important fact. how will he be able to tell ladybug about it if she doesn't know(somehow) that chat is Adrien?

Bitterseeet. Nothing big has been resolved except Adrien wisening up a little. Perhaps an epilogue of Adrien's feeling after the reveal would have wrapped thing up better.

I wasn't expecting this, but it's still perfect. The thought of them not being together as a couple at the end but as friends is just...well, genius. Knowing that they don't have to be together to have a happily ever after. I love it. Well done.

Aww poor Adrien I can't imagine how painful that must have been for Marinette... :(

Can you do a reveal soon, please

This was a really good story with good description.

Poor Adrien.