The changes you always try to make to Naruto's outfit are stupid and based on personal bias. Orange is in fact an awesome color. Trying to make Naruto into Ichigo is also fucking stupid. Stop it. Naruto isn't Ichigo, he isn't Cloud, he isn't Luffy. He's fucking Naruto. You taking him and trying to turn him into other characters is retarded. You're one of the worst "authors" and I use that term very, very loosely for you, in the entire Naruto fandom. The only ones that might actually be worse at it than you are and St3rfire_Serafina, but either way? You're a blight on the Naruto fandom. I love NaruSaku, truly I do. But you being an author for this pairing makes me sad on a deeply personal level. Please, leave your keyboard alone, you're embarrassing yourself.

more please its getting really good.

It's impossible for Sakura to jump in front to take a hit even in canon but it's possible for Hinata because she already did it with Pein. I guess that's why it's just a fanfic. Great read tho

Nice story I hope you continue writing it

How about a duel summons Toad & Dragon.

A jumpsuit is what Gai and Lee wears. A onepiece. Naruto wears an orange tracksuit. It Is Not A Jumpsuit

So far so good. However its team taka not taki. Taki is waterfall. Taka is hawk. Team Hebi became team Taka after joining akatsuki

Great story

PLEASE UPDATE CONSTANTLY IM ENJOYING THIS SO MUCH!

At least update this constantly

I can't wait for the next chapter to see what's happens next and can u please continue your other story called the loneliness of the fox.

great story. so f far I wanted to know if u could make a Naruto and Tsunade story because they are not a lot out there, and some are bot that good.

Update Stone it's a good story so far keep up the good work

This doesn’t seem as fluent as it could be and you are using basic words. I saw you write ‘Naruto/Sakura sighs’ three times in a row which makes this kind of repetitive. The plot seems good though. However, you need to put more effort into someone’s emotions. Naruto convinced Sakura too easily in regards of convincing Sakura to stop being a fangirl. Normally, she would break down crying and think about it instead of accepting it immediately. It took Tsunade like two to three years to make her grow out of being a fangirl and a capable chunin.

Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next. Ya gotta mention the harem of his lol. You know both of them just want to jump each other badly lol.