| Reviews for Hearts Mended by Flesh |
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Guest chapter 12 . 1/15 Everything was going great and then Nora came and ruined it all with her being a slut. |
Guest chapter 6 . 1/11 Welp, that was fun. I don’t get why you answered reviews that have the same answer though. |
linkjames24 chapter 12 . 10/17/2019 Nice. |
Guest chapter 12 . 10/9/2019 bruh. Nah Fm think I'll pass. Can't believe I forgot this fic. Lets hope I'll remember this time. |
Guest chapter 12 . 10/9/2019 Are they even wearing condoms in this? i know people are free to fuck what and whoever as long as its consensual but holy fuck practicing safe sex is a non-negotiable neccesity. |
T chapter 12 . 10/9/2019 Man, when Team RWBY comes together at Mistral things are going to get interesting. Chance of orgy? |
NoOneImportantHere chapter 12 . 10/9/2019 And once again, like a bat out of the proverbial hell that is this weird, overly serious fandom comes everybody's favorite Lancaster smut that at this point is basically a casual RNJR orgy that just happens to involve romance. As one of the few bastards to read the Martial Arc's section I can say that that boy's love was spicy. We even got a bit more Sugar Rush on the side but Nora being so rough kind of made it more of a fight then necessary but I appreciate that it's there. We even got the lewdest of all, consensual hand holding between two men and probably the hottest kiss this story has that didn't involve Ruby pressed up to a tree. And finally finish off with not just double penetration but a fourway sandwich of ever hole between Jaune and Ruby getting filled including their mouths, that kiss counts as the last hole! And this basically answered that Ren and Nora are bi, or at least willing to fuck people they honestly love. Once again, this entire situation is kind of sweet. Even Ruby's mind momentarily going into a cursing windmill of lust and insults was still shown with everyone being careful with her before going off. Now, admittedly there wasn't much plot. That's fine though because we now see where everyone stands. Jaune is bi and wants Ruby to at some point pound his rear. Ren likes to experiment and trusts his friends and new girlfriend so show him safely. Nora finally gets to indulge and finally has a chance to properly plow Ruby, which will inevitably lead to Jaune and Ren joining and starting another foursome, probably where they trade boyfriends for it. Or maybe not, I don't know, I'm not the author. And Nora explains the ins and outs of wearing a rubber and having an open physical relationship but not necessarily romantic, but at this point I wouldn't be surprised if some weird feelings started appearing between more then just the two couples. I mean, the moment Ren gives the okay for Jaune to plow his butt now you might as well start dating seriously (kidding of course. They already held hands so they're officially married). Oh, Tyrian's still hunting Ruby. That's going to be awkward. And Qrow is drinking SO HARD right now. Can't wait for more, whenever you post. |
Gravenimage chapter 12 . 10/9/2019 Okay I didn't like the Jaune/Ren and Ruby/Nora thing I thought this was a Jaune/Ruby story. |
ClawV23 chapter 1 . 10/9/2019 This is without a doubt the least sexy chapter 1 I've ever read. Poor Jaune! If that was my first time I'd call it off after Ruby suggested the whole 'touching without looking' thing, to me that indicates she's either not ready yet or just taking the piss out of me. Either way, I'd decline politely so I can go catch some Zs after all that training. |
Haven chapter 6 . 8/3/2019 This site should consider implementing a blog feature. Stuff like this should be kept separate from the story. Especially when people are Reading through old on-hiatus stories and all of this has long stopped mattering. |
HornetFreak chapter 11 . 7/16/2019 I can’t help but wonder if this story has been abandoned. If so, that really sucks. I really was enjoying the story element to it. |
Weird Crack Shipper chapter 11 . 6/5/2019 You shoulda added Nora into the pairing with Jaune and Ruby or something cos I only came here for some Lancaster DX |
look2019 chapter 11 . 5/8/2019 Good Chapter! |
MiharuTousaka chapter 8 . 5/2/2019 After reading the next chapters I really do feel like this is the end... because those Halloween chapters... *shivers* And to be honest is don’t like where the newest chapter is taking things... uwu |
MiharuTousaka chapter 10 . 5/2/2019 What... did I just read... what in the actual f- just... what? I’m not sure whether to laugh or curl up in my closet... |