Hahaha me gustó. En especial este final
Gracias!

"The perfect stick, come to papa"
Me:" hahahahaha"

Yeah so I’m a recent adult and this is a “little kid’s movie” (or so Mom says) but I DO NOT CARE, I’ve watched both this and the show several times, plus read several fanfics, all in the past week BECAUSE IT MAKES ME FEEL SO HAPPY. Thank you again!

Okay. So what I said in the first review I posted? This is better. This is a lot better. It feels more real. Thank you.

Okay so I saw someone posted the rewrite of the entire movie from Branch's POV. It was amazing. This is different. (For one thing it’s “Branch thought” versus “I thought,” which have different feels.) This is amazing!

When I saw the movie the best part was that i had said that i wanted too stab the cloud a few seconds before Branch started trying to.

Great job! This is amazing!
It would be funny if maybe in a one-shot Poppy finds this and is like 'Branch, What the fuck is this"

Good foreshadowing, nice slow burn again. Poppy had more depth in this chapter which was nice. I think a transitional line would have tied this together. Something along the lines (ha puns) of this,
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would have worked to show transition of time between the "glitter episode" and the next conversation. Otherwise it gave a confusing message that this had occurred at the same time, despite the hour later remark.

Once again, really nice insight on the character. Lovely slow burn with Branch towards Poppy. I do think though, just because this is a Branch's POV story, doesn't mean you can't expand with showing more emotion and depth with the other characters, such as Poppy. It doesn't need to be there POV, even simple explanatory verbs would suffice. Explaining there face expression, or how they sound when they speak, in adapted in your own format, can give the characters more of a sense of aliveness about them, than sounding copied out of the movie.

Despite my hatred for first person POVs you pulled it off pretty well. I liked the deeper insight it lead into the movie, suggesting the characters thoughts and emotions while following the plot gives the story a lot of depth. The only thing I could suggest it just simple grammatical issues such as using the word "survived" instead of "survive" in the beginning. ("...I built traps and kept watch. I survive")

The last chapter was awesome especially the last line what Branch said.

Great story! I loved reading this and I laughed multiple times :) I hope you keep writing those wonderful storys and have a wonderful day/night

That last sentence reminds me of a game I watched... I think it was Battlebock-nonsense I don't really remember the name of it.

"We set an empty potato chip bag on fire (don't ask)"
Branch, how did you set an empty potato chip bag on fire? B)
SAVAGE!

Some people say Creek (Or as I like to call him, Creep) never sang during the movie, but he did!
Remember that part when Chef opened her stomach pouch and all the captured trolls were revealed? All the captured trolls did a little dramatic little voice number (No idea what its called XD) and yes, I mean ALL OF THEM! Creep was a troll that was captured by Chef, and he did that voice number too!
If yo don't believe me, go watch the movie again, and pay close attention to that part!