Well written on the touchy subject of rape, and relationships between the two.

I really like your style of writing, especially for a story like this. I hope you decide to write more of it!

Wow this would be a really interesting story to continue. I hope you find the inspiration and motivation to do so

My only critic is that you should use a dictionary when writing your fanfics. It really helps a lot when you know how to spell a word you have no clue how it is spelled or are unsure how to spell it. The word 'opportunity' is what you made a mistake on. Other than that, I enjoyed this.

You're a great writer! Please continue writing for this universe- I'm really looking forward to continuing this story!