good lord that was adorable. thank you so much for sharing with us I love it!

This is so fluffy, it it's emotional. Those are the best. This is the best.

WOW. That was so cute. I love it. My favorite Nalu fluff actually

This story is absolutely incredible!

This was a great story and appropriately emotional. Unlike some fics I've read, the kiss didn't seem forced, which is always appreciated by readers like me. However, I did notice that you used the wrong words a couple of times, i.e. 'revived' instead of 'received' in the second paragraph, as well as missing some commas and apostrophes. Keep writing; you did a great job. You just need to watch for those silly mistakes.

Hmm...Try separating the story into chapters.

this was so cute. I LOVED it. keep up the awesomeness...

That was really sweet...

Great story i hope you write more!

The story was well written !
Keep it up!
Just some minor grammatical mistakes ..

This was great and I really enjoyed all the fluff that followed that depressing conversation. Very nice job with your first fic and I'm really looking forward to what you have in store for us in the future.

Keep up the good work and until the next time.

That was so cute!

You write well! Really well! Keep writing!