Scrabble was not invented until 1938.

I am enjoying the story so far. It is intriguing. But I cannot remember Lucas or Micah saying "aye" at any point in the series. Did women like the school teacher ever wear cornrows? That seems very unlikely.

I was so excited to see an update! I really enjoyed it!

Oh my goodness, please update this story! I was so enthralled and then so disappointed to find it isn't complete! Please write more!

There are many Rifleman stories out there but this is one of the best ! I have already read it countless times and I never tire of it.

This was beautiful. And also really nice to have after a not so great work day. Thanks for another wonderful set of chapters.

So intimate, so caring!

The new chapters were really good. Lucas and Emery's confrontation should be interesting.

The new chapters are great! Chapter 16 did really tug at the heart strings. I have to wonder if this is the incident that leads to the first paragraph of chapter 1 with Eirik leaving.

doesn't feel rushed to me. really sweet ideas there!

interesting chapter. I thought the conversations were really natural.

finally! I've been waiting for you to update. really cool story! and interesting OC!

oh, so sweet! and some more background for our hero... nicely done. I like how you insert small pieces of information and mind-sets for Eirik... more please!

wow, this was really cool. i thought the whole conversation was most natural. you've got a way with colours and moods that really set a scene!

I really enjoyed the new chapters you put up. Don't worry about perfection, as you said above, you can always come back to fix any errors or adjust parts that weren't quite right for you (if it's the latter make sure to let readers know). Thankfully, there are very few people on this site who will deem a fic as bad if the author doesn't use university master's level English. I only have an account on this site so I could clean up my favourites bar as all I can manage to write are nerdy essays on the humanities. Not the best thing for this site! You are doing really well and as I said in my previous review you have a great command of story telling so keep up the good work!