holy shit Nya you are personal friends with two robots and you know full well that they are people

Oh it's been a while since I've seen this fic! I'm all caught up now and it's still as incredible as ever ... ZANE'S CONFESSION; I cackled. And Hykos is ... more and more fascinating the more you write him.

It's almost over!? Not sure if I have reviewed this story... I came in kinda late but the ideas totally blew my mind!

Ok so wait... are Jay's eyes for the moment purple with gold flecks!? Because that is so brilliant and I can't keep it down. Not only are his eyes complimentary colors now, but he also is using colors for royalty! Gold because, gold, and purple since in medical times it was the rarest of colors and was mostly used by the upper class! Not only that but purple and gold (or yellow) are my ideal bedroom color scheme, since purple makes for restful sleep and yellow star's on the ceiling make it pop!

Probably expected some theory as to WHY his eyes have gold flecks... but honestly I'm an art major and love my color theory more!

Also looks like I wasn't the only one putting the hate on trees... I had to draw one today and it had the audacity to have 2 very large and very long branches stuck in it from the last windstorm, making quite an odd drawing of a tree with branches that seemed to go in the opposite direction and angle of all the other branches!

Ehh... I should stop now, except...
Zane smarten up! I think I remember that you didn't tell Kai who you liked, so telling him about the thing wouldn't do nothin! :p

please add more chapters read whole thing needs more please!?

Well done KB.

Another great installment

The original and best Broken Circles story is back. I love that there’s going to be a wedding now. That’s so sweet that all the confusion was cleared up.

Still dreading what this whole dragons gold will mean for Jay though

Hey I'm really enjoying the story! Couldnt help but notice, I think you mistakenly made it sound like the last part was in Cole's head, when I think you meant Lloyd? With the whole, be careful dad near the end, plus he was also talking about himself in the third person. Anyway it's interesting that you have now added in Saunders and input from Koko!

Loving it, I'm absolutely loving it.

when i first saw this story i immediately recognized the lyrics used in the description. since then ive read the story and it has become my favorite ninjago fanfiction. i tend to listen to ignorance on repeat for each new updated chapter i find.

*wheezes*

Wow, okay, that was one heck of a ride of a chapter.

BUT I SENSE INFORMATION ON THE HORIZON. I mean, even more than there already has been revealed in this chapter.

And it's funny, I had a hunch that Idris was based off of movie Lloyd! Given that his mother's Koko, I feel justified in my hunch. :3

Also, holy crap, Zane.

But I suppose we don't find out about that until later, because Jay's up!
Man, it'll be interesting seeing Jay talk to Vip-Hykos face-to-face.

aH YEAH HE'S ALIVE

THANK GOODNESS I. I WAS SCARED FOR A SECOND
mORE THAN A SECOND, ACTUALLY.

But man, what's this about gold? And dragons?
AND WHO IS IDRIS, MAN.

Oooh, another very good, edge of the seat chapter. Plus, it's going to be interesting to know more about this dragon's gold deal that I assume Jay has agreed to.

ps: I used Storm in my story too and the name 'James', it seemed that Jason was a little too obvious.
Also, I went onto Twitter to find out more about Jay's birth mother, and asked about her being the former master. Tommy A said something along the lines of there being tragedy involved.

OH THAT'S A NICE CLIFFHANGER TO END ON

ALL OF THAT AND THEN ... HE'S DEAD

I'M GOING TO HOPE THERE'S A TWIST. THERE BETTER BE A TWIST.

Skylor may not trust V but she should have taken his word for it and just kept away. Ronin doesn't seem to happy about being in such close proximity either, can't blame him either.

As always, a thoroughly thought provoking chapter. Well done to both. Maybe I could ask Lilly to help with my long story too?