Awesome! Ill be waiting eagerly for my next chapter!

Hey There,

I wanted to say that I have always been a big fan of Tenchi Muyo and have been a big Kiyone fan as I’ve been rewatching and I love this fic. I love how you’ve warped certain events and sort of “manned up” Tenchi into a really nifty character. I’m not one usually for Harem fics or humor per we, but I’m definitely hooked on this one and I can’t wait to see it continue. Keep up this amazing work, you’ve definitely got yourself another dedicated reader.

Sincerely,
TheLifeLongEditor

I am reading another of one of fanfics, the one where Arthus decided to retreat instead of burning the ships. I cannot wait for another chapter to this story, so please continue it. I love the way you are mixing elements of manga, OVA, and universe series together. Keep it up.

Let's be honest...it's just Ayeka and Mihoshi. This isn't all that bad. Mihoshi practically reverses causality.

Oh wait...you thought of that.

I'll be honest, this Kagato scares me more than the original. More...menacing.

I see what's happening...alternate girl.

Oh wow. That's a good plan. I wonder if Mihoshi could pull it off.

_ Partner? I see whatcha did there

But dammit...I should have thought of a paradox. It's a damned if you and damned if you don't.

Tsunami...the walking Deus Ex Machina...literally

Oh crap...dimensional nightmare works

Awesome. I expected as much. Cool.

Well written. Good.

Seriously, Clay? Could you be less creepy?

To be fair, everyone has a price. I can't fault Nagi on this one.

Psh...Clay almost delayed himself.

"then the main increased" - "pain"

I swear...bunch of harpies...traditional ones that do bad things to men P

O,o Why do I have a feeling Nagi just feel for the man?

Whelp. Glad Washu went to the climax. Guy didn't deserve the foreplay.

You don't have to stop the tide, but maybe you change slightly change its course?

Really looking forwards to this this new universe and very curious to see the changes.

Ahh. That moment when you see something out of the corner of your eye, and when you look at it, it's gone. Creeeepy.

, Washu did what?!

Hmm. If Kyone was pushed off the reality of one world through assimilation, and her soul, which never existed here, was pulled through, then there could be a way to ground her in this dimension and keep her when the dimension (timeline) shifts!

I think you mixed up Kiyone and Sasami though, once again.

"felt flush" not "felt flesh."

O,o I never considered THIS direction. Noice twist!

Fun fic! I cant wait to read the rest of it.

Excellent chapter. You are doing well. Put your real life first.

poor girl of kiyone

Exciting

good

interesting