This is getting messy! the fight between Bella and Rose didn't make much sense to me and more than that Bella should have apologized right away, who the hell waits weeks to talk about something like that and the conversation at the zoo was kind of all over the place, also i don't think it is possible to do that to your imprint, being away that long or mistreating her like that.
Both Bella and Rose contradict themselves at moments with their ideas.. and i don't understand how Rose had doubts about Bella being her mate it should've being clear as soon as Bella imprinted on her.
At the beginning you're playing with the concept of singer and mate as if they are the same and that's fundamentally wrong, you cant't hurt your mate so the same person cant't be your singer. Making Bella her singer reminds me of the original Eddie :v

I just found this story last night, it is beautiful. I hope you get back to it soon.

I love this work of yours.. Hopefully you'll update again soon but no rush though. I really love how it's kinda a slowburn in its own way and idk it made me think and feel a lot. Lots of love!

"I'm afraid I have a prior commitment"

that was priceless. I literally laughed out loud.

At this point of the story, I don't see how Jacob and Leah are ever going to get together when you have him eyeing Jessica and a few other girls. That's just me though. Still, the story is still okay, but I am not liking wolf!Bella. Even putting her as an Alpha, she is still either whiny or really b****y when she doesn't get her way. She doesn't deserve the position.

Great chapter. I love how you wrote Bella's depression and I love her friendship with Jacob and Leah and its impact on her. The motorcycles scene felt a little repetitive and unnecessary and messed with the flow a bit but other than that BPOV was perfect. Rosalie's POV was great too. I love seeing a character, especially a female one, lose their morals. I just hope she's not past the point of no return. Well done with having thoughts of Bella holding her back from truly becoming unraveled but I just hope she never ever hurts Bella like this again. She took Bella for granted and I hope she can realize that.

Rosalie's losing her mind and my heart hurts for her. I think Edward is right and Rosalie just turned to the wrong people who want to use her and fan the flames of the negative things she believes. I feel bad for her and it seems like the memories of Bella have become her conscience so I hope they're reunited soon.

please continue please

Ugh I hate it though. Infidelity is 98% not ok and I stand by that. It’s oh so terrible. People make mistakes but Rosie poise ain’t a (human) person! Also it just doesn’t seem like the kinda thing she’d do, but I guess she is figuring herself out.

That being said, fair is fair, so make Bellaxsomeoneelse real for a moment lol

Well all I can say really is that I hope Rosalie doesn’t entertain whatever Victoria wants. I like her but damn I don’t want her interfering.

How is it even possible that you took Rosalie, someone who is bathed in hypocrisy, selfishness, and insanity, and then made them even worse? I really don't see how anyone could find such a person anything more the deplorable. I get that you're going to do the whole redeeming thing, but I personally felt you took it too far. You've actually done a great job with Bella which makes what you have did with Rosalie even more bizarre. Then you brought in a Victoria that has a massive fixation on Rosalie... Tiresome.

Well I gave it a try. Best of luck with the rest of it.

Absolutely adorable

That’s adorable

I’m honestly surprised about how soon this happened but cool.

Also should I be afraid about the fact that I saw Rosaliexvictoria in ur pairings?

Oh damn#2 that’s cool, I mean it was gonna happen, but like I enjoy how it did.