XD not my style cya.

This would be better as non reincarnated individual. Seeing an adult having nightmares and acting like this is putting me off.

Loved it !

Wow, just spent all day reading this and it’s awesome! I love your OC, I love how you’ve changed the plot and I look forward to reading more!

It’s so well written and the characterisation is really well done, especially with Kakashi. Maen is awesome, I love him! And I would really love to see more Kasumi/Sasuke since they are both in Konoha still.

Hope you will come back and update someday, really amazing fix!

This is so great! I loved it! Hope you update again:)

Is it bad that this chapter kinda made me ship Kasumi and Ino?

wow. this story is so fucking amazing. the characters are so on point but so human. you make them all so real and all the changes so realistic! I love it all so much! I cant wait for more!

I'm re-reading this fic, because it's one of my favourite fics and randomly realised that this rewritten fic doesn't have (yet?) on her becoming an Anbu and her team finding out that Kakashi never reported on her skills? Wondering if that would happen again or are you removing it?

Looking good! A little bit heavy on the SI helplessness, but considering she's really only 12 I can see it- she needs to be built up and that takes time. I hope that she starts to really focus on her training soon!

Kasumi really needs one of these teachers to regularly beat the living shit out of her. She has someof the best damn senses in the entire village and yet she lets herself get startled and snuck up on constantly. She needs to have awareness beaten into her, or something.

I really hope Kasumi gets good st some point. It's annoying with her basically at the level of her peers when she keeps going up against what may as well be gods.
I mean, I understand making her godlike as well is bad. Just the sad part about sticking to canon events as a guideline forces you to rely on plot armor to keep people alive.

And this is why you don't tell people your max sensing range. Means they know exactly how far to be to stay out of your range.
Hopefully this will make her work to increase the range and keep it quiet.

She snapped Zabuza's neck, not slit his throat like she told Shikaku. Minor detail but meh.
Also, yet another MC with a god complex. Pretty standard, but annoying.

I just can't get over Naruto calling Kasumi "mama" all the time . . .

Why the hell does Naruto call her Kaka and how does that even come about?