Sorry there are two mistakes in my review of chapter 21. One is it will be why don't u give ash a Gallade instead of i. Second is it will be red's scarmory instead of scarlet.
All the best.

Hey bro, thanks for writing another amazing chapter. To be honest, I was a little critical of the first few chapters especially the mount moon incident which I feel could be better. But hey, that was still a good try which I appreciate. But from the cerulean episode, the story becomes brilliant. U improved dramatically. Currently I believe that this story is even better than challenger. Keep it up and one day the fanfiction will be legendary.
The team u have set up is awsome. Snorlax, Venasaur, and Infernape will be monsters in battle. I am also happy I have ash trapinch. Flygon is a strong pokemon and extremely under rated and it deserves some love. Xatu is also an interesting choice. By the way I have a few suggestions/queries regarding ash team.
One is why don't I try giving ash a gallade. I know ash two physics but still I think it fits. Gallade has excellent attack and special defense. It's defence and speed is shitty, but can be taken care by bulk up and agility. Also it has a variety of move pool like lead blade, x scissor,night slash, drain punch, thunder punch, poison jab,close combat, psycho cut and many more. I am surprised than none of the fanfictions inspired by traveller bothered to give ash a Gallade.
Also my query is have u decided to give ash galar pokemon? Maybe a corviknight for another flying and duraludon/dragapult as a dragon? It will be interesting to watch the battle between red's scarlet and she's corviknight if he catches one. Those are new pokemons and u may use in future.
Anyway these are only suggestions. It's not that I am demanding or something. I will love this fanfiction with whatever pokemon u give ash.
All the best for future chapters.

Does he ever regain those memories or is the moral of the story we're all slaves to fate and need to die when the plans command us to?

I wonder, when will she reveal shes modified his memories and brain?

May Sabrina rot in hell, hope she gets offed

good fic

I as well wasn’t into Dynamax honestly. I would you to use Z-Moves, maybe by the main characters since it probably doesn’t make since yet. It’s a big part of Aloha’s trails and I think of them as short term Mega Evolution moves. If want refs if you do use them I would suggest Eldritch by TaurusVersant on ao3.

As far as first chapters go this was awesome! I’ve met the main characters, got a taste of the relationships they’ll have and Ash already has two great Pokémon. Also your writing is top quality so that helps a lot too

Nice chapter.
Always good to see training chapters especially when the team is pretty much set and getting to their final forms where they can really develop their battle styles.
They may have taken a bit too easy to the new moves and some of them could have been taught the move from another team member that already knew it or had an affinity for the type which would have promoted more interactions but that’s just my opinion.
Small discrepancy with Eevee- in the Pokédex article you wrote “there are only a few alive” but later you say something along the lines of they are rare but not hard to find.

Great long chapter, Megavolt looks like a game changer and Golduck learning to fight in water is a good boost, glad Ash take better training. Its funny when Surge and Misty shooed him when training them, but understandable, he should know no one reveals secret training methods so easily to others.

The battle with Erika is good, wonder how Saur will grow under Erika's Venusaur?

Nice to see Ash take training as seriously as he did in this chapter. Really liked how he got all that help too.

Hey man, glad to see this! A solid boost-up chapter, giving the whole team some much needed training and new moves. Bit worried about the TMs you gave them, though - three for some, Zeus learning four: it can feel like a really big bump in the road, and I'd suggest spreading them out more in the future. Also consider being able to teach them TM moves naturally - I can definitely see Monferno having been able to teach Kratos brick break, and other things like that.

Hydrus getting some underwater training is good, and Megavolt sounds awesome for Zeus - although now I sort of wish you had reversed these two chapters lol, if only so we could see all the new techniques during the tournament.

All in all, great chapter, and keep up the awesome work!

nice chapter

nice chapter thx for writing it
poor ash being dragged to the expensive place by eevee :d
nice battle's with surge and erika

Nice chapter. But didn't screecher already evolve in previous chapters?