I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!

Hey guest FUCK OFF! This story and this writer are both great!

Please commit suicide. You should not live.

Nice chapter I liked this story.

ok good chapter

nice job on the new chap. i cant wait to see what happens in the next chap and what yugao friends will think when they find out that she is with naruto and the same with naruto. keep up the great work

Nice. But I feel like it was either half done and you posted anyway or you will post another chapter soon. Hope it’s the latter lol

Cool chapter man keep up the awesome work thanks.

Thx for the update

Your sentences run-on more than a crack head on speed... please punctuate where needed. Your stories have great potential!

very emotional rant regarding her feeling and the situation very nice

of course naruto would force help for the poor he lived that life probably worse in all but 2 way if cat rant was anything to go by the two thing poor might have to deal with he was reluctantly protected from at least

Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Ohhh ny godssss u watting this fict for 2 year really...
Pleaseee just complate dont abonden this fict...

I like the setting so far but the grammar and the way you write it kinda makes it meh at the moment.

I was pulled in by the summary... First chapter honestly is trash so if i were you I'd reread and fix all the mistakes. Also you rushed the fucking hell outa this (hinata) so either change it by saying that "in the time of the war Kiba saved here and sparked something in her and later flowered into love" but yours is unacceptable.