Wow...I dunno about this. Leo just doesn't seem like the type to be that way : /

Good fic, but wow... you made Leo scary! D:

First off, congrats on your first fanfiction! Okay, now to the story! I loved that you did a character not written about mich, and i loved that it was Leo! You also did a great job comparing Kazuya to Leo, and you really pointed out the major similarity of them both losing their mothers! Finally, the description you used to put the scene in the reader's head was amaxing, and I can't wait to read more of your stories in the future! (Puts hands in the air) For the forgotten characters! :D