Please update this story is so good and can't wait to see what happens next

The story is quite fast paced, but I do like the overal theme and direction of the story. One small thing that kinda irritates me is the nick names hahahahahhaha. I find them so cringy, but yeah overal I like the story, pls continue!

This story is great so far and I really hope you update it really soon.

I tried to give this a go but it needs a lot of work. You mention that Charlus is 24 in the first chapter which means he would have been 12 when the Potter's were killed and could not have been Harry's guardian at the time. Also you claim he's a Slytherin but he's acting awfully Gryffindor in the first couple of chapters. Then despite the fact that Harry jumped at the chance to live with Sirius in the original story, I don't think he would leave with Charlie without even finding out who he was he is not that trusting. Lastly all of your characters seem a bit 1 dimensional, I as the reader am not given enough chance to get to know the character before the scene changes, so all of their reactions to everything (like Harry bossing Charlie around and Charlie telling someone he doesn't know about the bond) seem very unrealistic. The story seems as though it could have potential, but I would suggest slowing down and not trying to rush all of the scenes.

Does Charlie truly think Harry will forgive & forget about Ron? It's not in his character. Who did Ginny & Hermione think they were, barging into his private quarters & snooping. They didn't get reprimanded either. Who is Harry's legal guardian currently? As a blood relative & bonded, Charlie is the logical choice. That doesn't disturb Dumbles in the least, as he'll ignore anything he wants to. But Charlie could pull Harry from Hogwarts, couldn't he? This keeps getting better. looking forward to the next update. Thanks

I like this chapter. It is a good chapter. Please update soon.

So the family is starting to unite. Is Bella allowed visitors in Azkaban? She is in high security, doesn't canon state no visitors there? Would have thought Narcissa too well bred to send howlers. That's Molly Weasley's forte'.

Cool

Poor Harry, he doesn't know just how much danger he really is in. Also, why are they going to Azkaban? I can't see Harry saying, "yes."

Trouble is brewing with Ron & Hermione. Ron isn't going to let go of his only friend, Hermione is just being a pain. Charlie needs to grow up, a lot. He is acting less mature than Harry, and if far more hot tempered. That should get him into trouble with McGonagall. Dumbles would give him enough rope to hang himself. Dumbles is still Charlies' boss. Will he step in to try to bring the trio back together, under his control?

Who's next on the list?

This was an interesting idea but the characters felt strange. Harry shifted from meek to assertive and was ready to forgive anything. Charlie raged but in the end he felt a little adhd and raging to Molly and then everything was fine with just a few sentence. Molly didnt even seem apologetic. And how come Charlie hasnt seen any of the articles in the newspapers?

I just found this and I love it so far! Even more so cus it’s still alive! I hope u update soon!

Nope Ron will never learn it just sucks that Buckbeak May end up paying the price.

Lol Ron and Hermione will never learn...ir is it the Headmaster will never learn. At some point he is going to realize leaving all the dirty work to the pawns will eventually blow back on him one way or the other.