That was very well written and exquisitely painful.

The very last sentence absolutely makes this fic. Very well done

I myself prefer Jason Isaacs in "the patriot" I just couldn't see Lucius as anything but a wimp. I prefer me some Snape but Jareth... oh yeah

Oh NO! poor Sarahbabe Q.Q

I'm glad someone did a darker version of the Goblin King. This does show how if he weren't trapped by rules that he really could be cruel, taking what he wants, doing as he wishes. Thank you for delvong into that. And for also going over the ballroom where you expound more on how she feels trapped by the masks and people. I love how much detail you put into Burns Like Ice!

My fave Lumione writer, in my fave fandom. *swoons* This is so gorgeously evil! I love it so much!

Oh this was creepy but really good. I liked the line about her tattered slippers, it really cemented that feel of the darker nature of fairy tales.

Wow...this was gorgeous & hot!

Thank you for sharing this gem with us. It's one of my favorite Labyrinth fics.

I only have two words: unexpected and amazing.

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This is a beautifully dark story. I love the imagery and the progression of it. It’s very different to many of the other one shots in this fandom. A completely cruel/dark Jareth is not commonly seen, and I think you wrote him perfectly. Thank you for this fic.

Oh my god! This gave me a feeling like gazing at the impossibly/unnaturally beautiful and somehow scary and dark landscapes that we sometimes see in our dreams. Bravo!

This. THIS. favorite ever labyrinth fic

Very well written. Poetic and short but very impactful. More, please!

very chilling! what a great read thank you for your time and the effort you put into this!