| Reviews for The Economic Power He Knows Not: Year Two |
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bkerrmom1 chapter 9 . 6/23 Great storyline ! I am looking forward to seeing what comes next ! |
FFFudgeUp chapter 9 . 6/6 I'm so glad Sirius was freed. Thanks for helping Dobby and for sharing! |
Guest chapter 2 . 2/1 Chapter 2 year2: Why would anyone write a will in which they bash an individual that is also a witness to the will? It makes little sense. |
csheila chapter 9 . 1/19 Much more sensible. I prefer a smart Harry |
csheila chapter 6 . 1/19 Insightful comment re boredom. |
csheila chapter 5 . 1/19 Love how you switch up canon to move plot. Makes it more interesting. Love seeing how folks fight back. |
csheila chapter 4 . 1/19 Nice to see a normal response to bullying |
csheila chapter 2 . 1/19 Don’t mind this prima Donna Harry. He can back it up |
csheila chapter 1 . 1/19 Good. Like the realistic conversations among the family. Love the art. Same goes for Harry being smart enough to trick Dobby re background |
Vampireking40 chapter 4 . 10/25/2019 Great chapter. This is the second story I have read where other and Harry or Harry himself have given Flitwick a better way to teach then standing on books. |
Razeus1 chapter 2 . 10/7/2019 OK, a few things that were a bit disturbing about the Will: James leaving Potter Family heirlooms to those not of Potter blood... the invisibility cloak, the family pensieve, the Potter Family manor and the whole Potter library? What a way to cheat Harry out of his heritage! Unless you mean that they would only have access to those items, but not actually own them and I really hope that's what you meant. |
Razeus1 chapter 8 . 10/7/2019 Oh my, you just made my day with this! Best way to punish Dumbles... make him irrelevant to society as a whole and unable to manipulate people or events. |
old-crow chapter 9 . 9/13/2019 Hi, For what it's wort, cutting up a four part story into pieces has some downsides - the largest being people who are looking for longer tales. I enjoyed the second year and hope that the third year works just as well. cheers |
old-crow chapter 8 . 9/13/2019 Hi, The bit on Sirius getting out would have been less awkward if you had related it after the fact, or via a newspaper piece. The story is moving along nicely. cheers |
Anom nom e-mouse chapter 3 . 5/16/2019 you're doing a great job. just thought to point out... i understand that you are editing the first book, or already have, but as of the time of my writing this harry already met director Bones in the first book... the formal re-introduction seems out of place... keep up the good work e-mouse |