Love it!

Nice run!

The story gets better gradually, I would recommend for those who judge based on the first chapter (s) (like myself) to read it through. Awesome plot.

All hail God Emperor MrGoodyTwoShoes! Emperor of Critics United!Vj

Usually I don't review until I reach the end of a story but... LMAO! Those last few lines almost had ME gagging... and laughing like mad

Fun story, with some neat ideas...I’m not certain that Dumbledore’s explanation of Little Harry’s seeming development of a personality really satisfies, but I don’t have an alternative theory so will just shut up about it. As always, the quality of your writing is quite good, drawing the reader in and keeping them involved in the story...and the level of detail was appropriate for the overall story length. Just a really nice, fun read...thanks for posting!

Short, sweet and strange.

A very interesting take, i really enjoyed the story. It had good flow for the main storyline

I feel kinda bad for the clone, but at least he sorta got the chance to feel before he was replaced. It's a very weird concept. Personally I think a soul would have found him because he was sort of like a vacuum that nature of God or whoever is in control of souls would have had to fill. But this works too. Very unique idea.

Wicked start for a story, dude. Nice to see how you told the idiot off. Keep up with the great work and may the force be with you

"For those who do not already know, we're living in the last days; the times Jesus Christ warned about. All the issues going on is on a worldwide scale and its one of many proofs that these are the end times.

If you know deep down in your heart this is true & you feel something is not right in the world... I highly encourage you to seek our father in heaven while he may be found and to come out of this world while there is still time. Like 1 John 2:17 indicates in the written word aka the bible:
"The world and its desires pass away, but whoever does the will of God lives forever."
Many people are too caught up and is focused on the wrong things in life thanks to all the distractions going on when they need to realize destruction & judgment is not too far away. Fleeing to other countries or protesting on the streets is not going to make things better or save you; it's the love of Christ and your faith.

As long as your seeking Jesus Christ, you're gonna be okay. But if you're loving this life or is just so attached to this world... you're going to lose it. That is why I encourage you all to draw close to the father in heaven. You draw close to him and he will draw close to you. Do what you can to repent (turn away or stop doing it) of your sins. We all say & do things and stumble since we're imperfect creatures but if you sincerely go to the father in prayer and ask for forgiveness, he will forgive you; you just gotta mean what you say and repent.

Nobody comes to the father but through the son. You deny the son and you deny the father. But if you accept the son then you have the father. It's by Jesus' blood we're redeemed back to the father in heaven so you want to seek him in all your ways.

The father in heaven knows the hearts & minds of all of us so he knows who you are deep down and what you've been through. He cares about you. When you open up your heart and allow the father & son in your life, they're gonna take you where you need to go but you gotta be willing to seek them for yourself. Nobody can build your relationship with Jesus Christ. It's up to you to read the bible for yourself & seek the truth; reading the word of god feeds the spirit, gives you knowledge and helps clears up the lies & deceptions of the world.

Time is so very, very short since things are just escalating day-to-day. Don't allow the spirit of fear to overcome you. Just draw close to the father in prayer, let go of this dying world, repent and follow Jesus. Following Jesus Christ keeps one out of sin but it also separates you from this world and that's the direction you want to go; toward the son of the most high, our savior and redeemer.
Take care and remember it's the love of Christ and your faith. Don't allow anyone or anything to hinder you. Forgive and let go since we all fall short.

Chaos Control"

Children of Critics United, Super Shadow 2018 and his friends are innocent. Look in your hearts. You know the truth. All of us wants what is best for this site. So why don't we work together? Won't a house divided fall easier?

Chaos Control

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Ron as young Dumbledore was funny. Little Harry and Fawkes tearing apart Dumbledore's office in search of sweets is priceless. I was a little surprised the two only left him with Fawkes as a supervisor. Lesson learned on that one.

Sad that little Harry has no soul and may die at an early age. That seems cruel.

Harry had to do more cooking at the Dursleys than just "watching the bacon". Therefore, he should know how to cook some things.

Oh, that's gross! LOL. BTW, you never wrote anything more about what Tonks found. Or what Dumbledore took that Croaker wanted back. (Harry?) With the first chapter, and other bits here and there everything is very ambiguous. Was there a point to the prologue? Nothing came after that validates it. The "found thing" in the Dept of Mysteries? I think many readers may had, like myself, thought it had something to do with Sirius. Then I thought perhaps Harry. You HAD written that a headless statue took his body away, but then Albus said that everyone was surprised when Harry got up. How could they see him do that if he had been taken away?

Harry DID try to tell someone about Umbridge, he tried to tell Minerva. She told him to keep his head down. He couldn't tell Dumbledore as he ignored Harry all year and would leave whenever Harry was present. Harry couldn't keep up with quidditch training, as Dumbles very well KNOWS that Harry had his broom taken away and was banned from quidditch and flying.

Snape is far too competent and meticulous – especially around potions – to die that way!