I like your choice of writing it by Lampy's point of view. I can really hear his voice. And I could feel his pain when he was struck. Poor thing. Well done, my friend!

Haha! This sounds exactly like Lampy in the film. Incredibly accurate to his dialogue and 'short term memory banks.' I love it! Oh. Did I mention this sounds exactly like Lampy? Well done!

So good. Luv Lampy.

Once again, good job! Loved the 'moral' of the story.