Hey !
Woaa, I didn't know you had updated The Cold Factor !
I'm SO glad I came back to read the end of this incredible story T-T I can't imagine how much work it took to write something like this...
I know I'm a bit late, and that's why I'm asking : are you still writing the sequel ("On thin ice" If I remember right) ?
Otherwise, I'm in love with your writing style haha
Keep up with the great work 3

Holy hell this is the most amazing thing I have ever read. Captain Canary is and always will be the only ship I accept Sara Lance with, personally I found Ava to be uptight haughty and arrogant most people have sticks up their butts Ava has an entire tree, Snart respected Sara from the beginning and the trust and mutual respect with Sara grew into something believable you also perfectly captured their struggles and hardships and mostly the fear Snart had of loosing Sara he isn’t someone who scares easily but when he does its deep and you wrote that flawlessly.

can u write a story about Zari having a younger sister who was kidnapped when their brother died and then she gets experimented on and ends up with powers. Then Zari finds out and the legends rescue her and she joins the team and maybe falls for Wally west. Like make it during the time Wally is there so they fall in love

And WHAT a way to end this incredible story for absolute sure, SeaSpectre160, ever since you started it way back on that April day in 2017, and when I eventually decided to bother to check it out for myself, I knew this was gonna be a helluva great ride, and it so was just that. Legend of Tomorrow, barring out completely what other less supportive idiots say of it, is and always will be my favourite of the four shows that make up the Arrowverse, which will very sadly be only three soon considering that Arrow will be ending altogether when the Crisis on Infinite Earths crossover commences, I ALWAYS look forward to the fun and adventure given to us with every episode by Sara and the team, and I never tire of it.

My god did I absolutely LOVE this version of the Legends vs Legion of Doom final battle so much, the twists with the fates of certain characters and so on, but especially all the interactions between Len and Sara throughout the whole thing, Spear vision Laurel's words only added to the one hundred percent perfect sweetness of it all.

Finally, an answer to what I've been wondering what the hell about for a LONG time: this mysterious thing with 'Izzy' and 2024, and just HOW Leonard didn't die at the Oculus. So, the explosion sent Len into the future, to 2024, and he found out his dear little sister Lisa is in that year a mother to a daughter, Izzy. I'm taking a fair guess that Cisco is the father, considering that in the chapter following the Legends' mission in 1776, the Flash 3x22 one, Cisco and Lisa were going solid in a relationship together. I'm guessing also that THAT'S where Sara and the team found him again prior to this story's beginning. Thank you so much a big bunch for that, it's been nagging on me for ages and ages as I said, haha.

Certainly, Len's farewell to Lisa after dropping her off back where Eobard Thawne recruited her for the Legion sure was way better than Mick and 2014's Leonard's in the real season 2 finale episode. Man did it really touch my heart. A good thing of him to bring Amaya along for his rapid exit outta there.

Leonard and Sara's interactive moments before the breaking time thing happened were so so big time sweet and touching, and she's now his fiancé thanks to the still greatly done proposal he performed after the George Washington saving mission. I now pin my hopeful hopes big time on that in the sequel, when it is done in the future (you'll only need to read my review for last chapter for the rest of the words, haha), we'll see the wedding happen, cos that would wrap it up VERY nicely indeed.

So all in all, an absolutely a hundred million percent perfect job with this story right from the very start, well done, I've loved every single chapter along the way, and at whenever point in the future the season 3 covering sequel gets published, I look forward to that just as much the same

FINALLY. Oh man, you've no idea how surreal it is for me to see you back at last, after over a year, for the final part of this nothing but amazing to the last story, which as reviewer Trigon so rightfully says is one of if not THE best fanfic of Legends of Tomorrow on here, which got started two years ago, SeaSpectre160. And my god, did I so love this first chapter of the first half to the season 2 finale episode, and now that you've the final chapter itself up this very day, I'm about to read it and see for myself how incredible you've hopefully done the Legends' final battle with the Legion of Doom.

Regarding your end note, that's a good title choice to go with for the sequel, I support that, and the summary's just as well thought of. And take however long you need to get it done to the standards that suit you the most as an author, in fact I'd say your decision to go with getting ALL the chapters fully well written and then posted afterwards is a good decision, as you say it would avoid terribly long breaks, and I totally a hundred percent agree with you on Arrow, that show's just gone down to absolute bullshit levels really

So happy to read a new chapter! Loves it! And I'm ready to wait for the next one and the sequel when it will be ready!

Hi. I love this story which is for me the best fanfiction of Legends of Tomorrow. I love the change about Mick and Snart who is still here. There are several moments when I burst out laughing. Please update, I can not wait anymore (it's been almost a year since the last update). And strongly season 3.

This episode has always been one of my favorites. Who doesn't love a good zombie scare? Len's additions were very nicely done, and you captured his relationship with Mick fantastically. I also like that you included what happened to the time pirate, because in canon they sort of just forgot about him.

I actually read this chapter twice haha. Partly because it was that good and partly because I waited too long to post my review the last time I read it so I needed a bit of a refresher. So, I don't wanna make this one as long as my last reveiw, but I want to point out some things I enjoyed in chapter 3, here. I like that you kept the feud between Mick and Amaya about ninjas. I like that Amaya was a bit jealous of Len and Sara for being able to have their relationship out in the open. And I love how Len predicted that Nate and Ray would cause something to go wrong. Of course if anyone would be able to call it, it would be Len wouldn't it?

...Okay. Um, wow. I'm shook. One of my friends suggested this too me, and I'm so glad I decided to give it a shot, now! I really wasn't expecting this to be so well written, but let me just sayyou're writing is absolutely stunning! I loved every word of it! I was clinging to every sentence, and wasadmittedlykind of disappointed when I was forced to put it down for sleep or hygiene or some other necessity for life. Just...wow! Such and amazing vocabulary and talent! I breezed through the first two chapters in just as many days, and I'm excited to start reading the rest of your story; but first I suppose I'll tell you some specific things I enjoyed about each chapter:

Chapter one: The first sentence had me hooked on the whole thing, having me wanting to read more, hanging on the edge of my seat, even though I had a vague idea of what would happen, having watched the canon. I love Len's addition. The fact that he's with Sara is extremely great to me, because I am such a huge Captain Canary shipper! (I love Avalance and all, but Captain Canary just has something special about it, you know?) It's neat to see Sara having some restraint, when it comes to the cute girls she comes across, being in a committed relationship and all. It's something that I probably wouldn't have considered, if I were doing something like this. I wonder, should you go into season three, how Len might act around Ava. Would he be jealous of her?

Chapter two: I absolutely loved this chapter, and I am ecstatic that someone else detests the JSA as much as I do. Their attitude was just excruciatingly painful to endure that first time I watched it (and honestly it still is every time I rewatch the episode). I like the change up during their little spat with the Legends. (I agree it shouldn't be classified as a real fight.) Len would definitely be the one to step up and put an end to the needless squabbling, and it's nice to see that Sara and Leonard's relationship isn't perfect, like everyone expects relationships to be. They still have fights like normal. (And the scene where he was told to sleep on the couch was hilarious. I loved how Mick teases him about it too. They have a good bond, and that small interaction represents it well.) I like that Len would want Sara to be the team leader instead of himself, despite what Sara herself thinks. It shows how much faith he has in her, and I feel like that's pretty accurate to canon as well. He likes to be in charge, but acting as a baby sitter to a bunch of adults is tedious work. I thought it was interesting that you switched Amaya out for Stargirl in the club scene and didn't include Jax. I was reluctant to accept the change at first, but after hearing your reasoning for it, I think it actually makes a lot of sense; it's definitely an improvement. And I was absolutely thrilled when Len put Amaya in her place after she insults Ray. I just love the idea that he stands up for him even if he doesn't like him all that much. And lastly, it's nice to see that you're sticking to the canon through and through. I've never noticed that plot hole before, (I'm not sure a lot of people have) and I'm glad you did. It makes the whole story more believable, I think. (Plus, it just shows that you have a keen eye, yourself.)

Anyway, I hope you enjoy this very long review; there's sure to be more from me in your future! Have a good day!

Please do Season 3 and will we see the next chapter any time soon?

Darmok and Jalad at Tanagra. That was a bit of inspired madness, and it made me laugh *hard*. I absolutely love your writing, and the way you're approaching this re-write of season 2 is WONDERFUL! I've been reading your stuff for about a week now, and I love it. I love it all. I can't wait to see what you have in store for an alternate season 3!

This is awesome I always wondered how the team would work out had Snart been around, real Snart not that cheap Earth-X knockoff. With Snart around it shows how more intuitive Mick is and how more accepting the team is with him since Snart is there to keep him in check. I do wonder how if you do season 3 will you still introduce Fake!Snart on Earth X or the doppleganger of someone else I could see Snart forming a bond with Alex just like Sara did given he did anything for Lisa the way Alex would for Kara. Snart being engaged to Sara also means that stuck up B-hole Ava will not be around and quite frankly she was the one thing I hated about legends season 3.

Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please do Legends of Tomorrow Season 3 please.

Sorry I didn't review on the first part previous to this one, SeaSpectre160, but now I'm here, I just cannot tell ya how brilliantly done this Doomworld version you did was: Lisa with Tommy, Lewis Snart alive and a good man, Mick of course not getting the pinches after the memory restorations as in the real episode, as he's a lot better man in this of course, lol... I am just so so ready for the next and possibly last chapter of this unbelievably amazing story you've given us since last year, which will of course be the final battle between the Legends and the Legion of Doom in World War I again