So this is just another story where ozpin manipulates the oc into doing what he wants... I was kinda hoping this would be like Wizard Game where main character doesn't let ozpin manipulate them... I should stop hoping for better I'll only be disappointed

Like the story so far, but did kind of wish that Safira and Sarah could have been able to be more in the mix with the White Fang so as to be able to steer it away from the idiot ball it starts to pick up with the whole "terrorist" thing. Then again, with the part about her parents wanting Safira not wanting her to be drawn in and being a "figurehead", I cannot say anything negative about how things are rolling out with the WF.

Anyway, love the story thus far and hope for more soon!

This is still really great, no matter how many times I re-read it. I hope you write more!

Also, I can't help but draw similarities between Safira and Pyrrha. Both of them being placed on pedestals by their friends. Thought to be untouchable in some way, destined for greatness. When this story eventually reaches Beacon, I really hope the two end up being good friends. Not to rush it at all. I'm loving seeing a young Safira learning all her skills at Signal.

weapon idea: doubleheaded spear that can turn into a pair of daggers and a pair of pistols. I think it would work well b/c it's a lightweight build & works well with her wings

Regarding your author's note; Students start at Beacon at 17 and finish at 21, not 16 and 20

love it, and if i have to wait a year it shall be worth

Great Chapter. I honestly don't know how this story is not more popular lol. I mean its got good characterization, good pacing and its pretty realistic. No mary sues or anything.
Anyways thank you for the chapter and waiting the next one with impatience:)

Thanks for the cap

Thanks for chapter .

Thank you for the chapter ~

Its always a treat to see this story get updated, a shame you can't update more regularly but I can understand why. The characters feel like they don't intrude on the story and in the case of Safira's backstory, actually compliment it. The dialogue is pretty good too.

Like you said already, there isn't anything really big or significant happening at the moment but I myself am enjoying all of the 'in the life of' snippets so far.

Looking forward to more in the future.

I love this series and this gift it a pineapple. I give one to every story I enjoy. Just wish it was updated more often but understand if you can't.

Your story is really unique and non of the oc is out of place . Most importantly we have a badass phantom assasins here :D . Please dont drop this story , its hard to find a story as good as this . I am looking forward to next chapter .

Please for the love of all that is holy, make more chapters, I love this story so much, its very well written and paced, I don't ever feel the need to skip anything or feel like I'm missing out on something its truly amazing work, so please keep putting out chapters, I eagerly await the next update.

Safira & Weiss are fairly similar, so that would be an interesting meeting