This is a really unique take on DxD that I haven’t seen before and I love it. I know it’s a long shot since it’s been two years since the last update, but I’d love a new update

Are you going coming out with chapter 16?
Or did you give up on it?

Please continue I really love the story.

can't wait for the next chapter in this story

Get a beta. Your English needs work. I'm assuming it's not your first language, due to the weird phrasing and missing words.

A beta, one who is very familiar with the English language, could point out where you're making mistakes. You're making a LOT of them, by the way.

For instance, when they attack... what is "Take." supposed to mean?

Take what? Take "it"? Take "that"? Take "this"? Take by itself doesn't really mean anything, so clearly something is missing.

That's just one example. There are plenty to choose from throughout this chapter, alone.

When I read his height I had to google because I suddenly was afraid that FanFiction character from dxd was taller but I win at 6 foot 3

I enjoyed the first couple of chapter, but by God, the quality is going down exponentially. It's not the story or literary quality it's your dialogue, scene descriptions, and grammar. I have a sneaking suspicion that you did not even give this a once over when you finished it to look for mistakes or anything at all and that really shows. It would be okay if you fixed the mistakes, but right now it feels like I am reading a 5th graders story instead of someone who actually knows English. I am not trying to discourage you or anything, but this...this is disappointing.

Yo nigga youre gonna update right

Also cause it'd be tasteless to just pretend that it didnt happen, i hope youre doing ok without your dad, my condolences.

Love the story and cant wait for more chapters

Well thats really phatetic start to a story.
I mean rating game is almost the same as canon than what is the meaning of all the extra training and sacrificing body part.
In canon he got balance breaker by that

Still hoping for an update!

Helllllooooo? Any news?

Heyyyy. When’s the next one? It’s been a while...

I like the story very much so far, though you seem to leave important bits out rather frequently. the most annoying thing is how you useas quotes, or to emphasize a title or action. that's just not proper grammar

more please