you made a mistake you called him Ash twice

I know this is a fanfic but just to state Ash has aura similar to that of Sir Aaron

HEARTBROKEN!

Anyone else give Delgado the voice of Emperor Palpatine in their head? Just me?

GIVE HER AN ABSOL YOU CUNTWAFFLE

so ash chosen serena and give up the plate.
And a new guy appeared.
Seriously, when you will give ash a serious victory (and power up) instead of losing constantly like his anime self.

so he lost again, poor ash.
Damn, when you will finally give ash his godlike power up, same for his pokemon.
Ash doesn't really improved since the beginning.

Wow I can’t behave Kyle maded a deal with the devil and I really hope did does not come to bite him in th butt and even of iris did hurt ash in the past I think he should help her

Is Iris dead?

Wow I am glad Kyle won and has the ability to bond with his Pokémon like ash can and I fell can of bad for iris getting b at up like that

Wow nice battle between iris and Kyle

Just to let you guys know, I updated some of my chapters so they are more readable! Hopefully, it's better to underatand now, TFG.

Delgado is Calem

Am I the only one who wants Alain, Mairin, Sawyer, Gladion, and Lillie to show up? (... Squishy vs. Nebby)

I'm assuming all the Kalos people are on his side, since he hasn't gone there yet? (and will Alola be in here?)