Hope you update soon, this has so much potential!

Can’t wait to read more!

You've got me hooked. Hope you update soon

Update when you can Please!

please complete you can't possibly just leave it like this

No offence.. But i really hate you. And Black beard, of course. This story is very well written. And I love it Really. But i really hate it too. I am confused of my own feelings, now.. And i am NOT crying, Damn it! You are Crying! Give me that *snatches a tissue and wipes her tears*... Why are you doing this to me? Seriously, if you didn't update this and save Luffy and give him his will and freedom back. I will come here everyday and comment anything really. Just to give you spams. (of course that is beside me crying every night to sleep) so you have about five days to update. No longer. Then the spams will start. I am not kidding. I have decided that I love and hate the story at the same time. Love the plot and the way the story is written. And hate the brothers' sufferings and that Luffy lost his will to live and gave up his freedom . I actually don't believe it... Luffy would never give those up.. It just sounds impossible and unbelievable... Please update.. Or else.. And thank you for the story.

This story is greatly written and I love the plot. I can't wait for more. Thanks for writing it!

These are great chapters, I hope you continue making more!

This is good! Very interesting. But I am confused as to how old they are.

A raven haired boy ran [through] the forest desperately. He ignored the pain in his bloody limbs and his exhausted mind. After all if he gave in to the pain now, they'd catch him.
And once you're caught there was almost no chance of escape.
After all he would know this better than anyone.'Keep running' was what you could basically call the child's [motto].
It was a silent night, there was a full moon all that could be heard was the shallow weak breathing of the injured child, not that anyone would really boy would have given up if it hadn't been for the fact that his brothers would have most likely blamed themselves for his sudden in his thoughts the boy ended up tripping over a root which normally would not have been a problem if his vision hadn't started to fog. As realization hit him, he gritted his teeth and mumbled a curse 'dammit-' as he fell to the ground with a painful 'crunch'.He felt something cold clamp around his hands. As he suspected they were sea stone cuffs.
Without hesitation the boy stood up to see eight dark figures since there was no light though[,] what did he honestly expect?
He gave them a deathly glare[,] not caring much that they probably couldn't see it for the lack of lighting.
The boy threw a stupid blind kick at one figure causing him to fall to the ground lifelessly.[T]he man hadn't even had time to dodge the attack. As if on cue all figures pounced at the wild and dangerous child.
"You know you can't escape!" [A] gruff voice said[,] pinning the small form to the ground mercilessly."We always get what we want[!]" [A]n older sounding [woman] said as she pulled out some restraints from her travel bag[,] all the while the boy was growling and trying to bite the limbs that kept him pinned to the ground and stood between his freedom and brothers "[L]et go [bastards]!"

These are some of the mistakes in your story. There are more but I don't have the time to show them to you.

Aah... I cant believe that happened. one minute i was scrolling through the app the next im rolling on the floor with tears coming out of my eyes. This is awesome!

that's a great start! I hope luff can defend himself until his brothers get there!