Reviews for Mists of a Dawning Sky
Karma Kin421 chapter 21 . 7/17
Love love love it, please write more of this story when you can I'm dying to know more and I want to see if her crazy plan works out in the end.
Shamus12678 chapter 21 . 6/13
please update soon
shadowwolf2345 chapter 21 . 6/5
I love this stuff so much. I really hope there will be more of this and others soon when you have the chance to write more. But this is so far very good keep up the good work.
Abriv chapter 21 . 5/17
Love this pity you haven't posted more I read your authors note about having a sequel in the works
LeafShinobi1997 chapter 21 . 5/19
Please update soon.
ChaoticInscriber chapter 21 . 4/14
If there was ever really a sequel to this, I really really want to know more about it. Even if both are never finished, this 'verse is so lovely I would be over the moon to find out more things happening in it, even as an unfinished assortment with gaps galore.
(I want to flood this with hearts, but I've noticed sometimes half of each disappears and I don't know how to correct for it.)
ChaoticInscriber chapter 6 . 4/14
Oh yes. Fon doesn't even need to help hide the bodies for long, just get them out of sight enough he can disintegrate them. Reborn would have far too much fun curbstomping the "invaders" and Verde would alternately get to use them to live-fire test some of his works or collect the possibly-alive remains for study and more enclosed testing. That is if Lal doesn't snipe them down from afar before they get close enough for the others to do any of that, with a chance of Colonello helping her because it's fun and it's to protect someone she gives a damn about. Skull can drag Viper into his area of the garage to help check on some stuff (or to listen to him chatter at her about it while he's doing it), as an excuse to have her close to one of his rides to spirit her away in, just in case, even if the others would probably be slightly offended at the implication it might be needed unless they take it as a way to keep both Cloud and Mist/Sky distracted and feeling helpful while also out of the way.
ChaoticInscriber chapter 5 . 4/14
I'm amused that Reborn is the one most clearly not quite ticking on who they are talking about. *pokes Reborn* Did you really forget that part of why you found Mystique so very interesting aside from her looks? Or did you assume that was some kind of Mist-faked flavoring to her Flames to make it harder to connect her to Viper when she was first revealed to be both people?
I wouldn't be too surprised that he did forget. His level of attention and care to and about his conquests goes hand in hand with that.
edwardilovebella chapter 21 . 3/27
Second time reading this and I still love it. I hope you update soon.
Guest chapter 21 . 3/14
I LOVVVVVE LOVVVVVE LOVVVE IT
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YaoiBoisReading chapter 17 . 3/3
Your missing some words on chapter 17, it’s not really that fun to think of what there trying to say at the end of every sentence
YaoiBoisReading chapter 12 . 3/3
I’m dying in laughter, X3 I NEED to learn some flower language now!
YaoiBoisReading chapter 10 . 3/3
Pfffff, he really IS his mothers son X3 blackmailing his siblings already
Mukuro234 chapter 21 . 2/24
This was so awesome
JustAnotherMarvelFanGirl881 chapter 21 . 2/22
Oh me like.. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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