what a disappointment. I loved the story and the whole idea of it, but it's 2020 now, so it's probably dead... Imma go cry in a corner now

Honestly, at first i was skeptical about a separate storyline of Naruto outside the main plot. This is mainly due to the fact that not many and very rarely can come up with something interesting, but you made it. I also assumed that you would go over to the classic canon of history and just continue on. But you made a completely original version. Here I like Issei more than a surplus pervert, obsessed with women. And I was pleasantly surprised that you left him a human and refused to turn him into a demon.
I used to look at highschool dxd as another harem with ecchi, but now I began to think more about the selfish nature of the devils. And i began to see Rias as a less positive character who deserves a couple of life lessons.
And yes, despite the fact that here Rias is exposed as the culprit, for some reason I still hope that you will make pairing Naruto x Rias.
Please continue the story. I'm waiting wich impatiently to new chapter.

Interesting.

Drop the ch 5 already... xD
Well, loving it so far
-that pansy

Little weird how even Xenovia gives Naruto the cold shoulder but whatever. Everything's still pretty good in this little AU

The greatest problem is how little sense anything involving Naruto has. He's killed and immediately forgotten as well as him being there was one thing but the resurrection was another.

awesome story can't wait for the next chapter

please continue, I've already been abstinent from this story there.

Enjoyble story. Needs updating though.

gotta say interesting story so far, keep up the great work. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Still early but this already feels well on its way to being one of the top works in the Naruto/DxD section. It definitely feels like the most original, unafraid of being so heavily tied to canon. I am very much enjoying the development of Naruto, he's clearly not canon Naruto but the shift in personality is believable.
Only four chapters in and the characters already seem to show a lot of growth, beyond just Naruto himself. Issei has definitely grown in a very interesting way, forced to grow hard and fast without the safety net of Rias and her peerage. Rias' growth is also extremely interesting. Killing Naruto and seeing her mistake for what it was has clearly had a profound effect on her and you're working your way to showing it off really well. Just the fact that she chose not force Issei's reincarnation when she believed him to be dead shows that. I think I might be interested in her more than anyone else at this point.
Issei joining the church is an interesting choice, curious to see how that pans out. I have to say I was looking forward to the idea of a kind of balance between the factions with Naruto/Issei/Vali representing each as rivals. Issei joining the church feels like its shifting strongly to one side.
All in all, a great read so far. Looking forward to more and definitely curious to how your story develops. Great job, keep it up!

Very interesting fic, I'm actually excited to read more. This has a level of originality that is rare for this section of the fanfiction community. Most don't want to risk chancing the success of a fic on something they would have to painstakingly put together with an AU plotline. If I wrote a list of everything I loved about the fic I'd be here for half the day.

So I'll settle for the major points in the fic I found the best. Your take on the world where all things forgotten by the world go was very enthralling and a wonderful start to this fic. I was a little concerned with the hook or the opening line but the trip to that forgotten realm was a good way to cover your ass. The opening line is always the hardest part of starting a fic, if it isn't short sweet qnd eye catching chances are the readers will believe the fic is a flop.

Naruto's entrance into the Vatican was a bit of a surprise though. Naruto's whole backstory is basically him fighting against fate and anyone who sought to enforce it. The whole "God has a set path for us" thing normally would have made Naruto turn the other cheek. But the way you described the churches methods of recruitment made that little detail more believable especially when Naruto desperately wants a friend to trust and the church offers him that.

I'm eager to see what will happen when Naruto and Rias meets again after such a long time. I've got a few theories for that and a few other things but I think I'll leave this review here.

Hope to see more soon.

Fuck! You! Rias!

AGHHH THIS STORY IS TOO GOOD. SO MUCH INTRIGUE, MYSTERY, AND THE UNKNOWN!

You've even made Issei a relatable badass. Like, that takes SKILL.

Why do you do this to us, CruelRuin? Just because Cruel is in your name, should not define who you are...

Update.. Need the next chapter that cliffhanger killed me