| Reviews for Cliffside |
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WingedKatt chapter 3 . 7/16/2019 I saw the cover for this over on deviant art and thought I'd check it out. It's an intriguing story and I hope you'll be able to post the next chapter soon. |
Morfonious chapter 3 . 6/8/2018 I wonder what kind of plans that crazy wolf have for her? |
Guest chapter 4 . 5/19/2018 Where can we find the new account |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/19/2018 Chapters should have a strong finish. This was apparently rewritten and you still gave us this: “Judith had forgotten to breath (breathe) and for a second she thought she was dreaming. Foxes where (were) all dead, why is (insert: he) here then? He was looking over an edge of the thing (the “thing”, really?) they stood on; (semicolon, why?) turning back to the one he took (the one he took? How about “her”); (another semicolon) it wasn't the wind, it was the huge(-)eyed stare of the bunny pulling her mask of (off) that sent a shiver down his spine.” Aaaaaargh! |
thiswastheonlynamenottaken chapter 1 . 5/19/2018 Hello, I am Exalley's friend and I will be the new author of Cliffside. We have discussed the old plot and (hopefully) erased all of the plot holes, as well as setting the new Cliffside in what we call 'Old Zootopia', a Medieval-like Zootopia, simply because it would work with the story better. Planning for the chapters to be released once every two weeks (or one, if I finish early) :) |
emotionalsinusoide chapter 4 . 5/19/2018 What is your new account? |
Wildebunny the Eternal chapter 4 . 5/19/2018 Non-story chapters are against website rules. So is a duplicate posting. |
Fanreader26 chapter 4 . 5/19/2018 where do we find the new one? |
akanomie1 chapter 3 . 12/5/2017 hmm well cripes first...please dont refer to them as people and dont use words like hands...a few grammar issues here and there but the story plot sounds good...maybe find a nice beta? good luck on the story. |
Fanreader26 chapter 3 . 11/2/2017 the story is interesting please keep it up |
narusakufan1985 chapter 1 . 7/14/2017 This sounds like a really good story. Please continue. Judy and Nick forever. |
ShadowRaven27 chapter 3 . 7/11/2017 Two thumbs up for this chapter and I'm waiting for the next! |
PotterHead13 chapter 2 . 6/19/2017 Please update soon |
Tessarose777 chapter 2 . 6/17/2017 Fantastic story! Keep writing this story. :) |
InTheLionsDenOnDA chapter 2 . 6/18/2017 Interesting (re)start. Looking forward to seeing how this goes. |