Chaotic (ironic word, ain't it? :P) and funny

So... Kitten's in charge now?

While an interesting concept, the grammar really ruins it for me. The capitalization especially. Fix that, and this becomes much more entertaining.

Also you need to start a new paragraph every time a different character talks,

Why do you put a space between quotation marks and the first word of dialogue “ like this” it seems kinda weird and I wonder at the point of it.

Don't see a problem with that

Oh dear man-peror this is the text to speak version of warhammer

Please continue

Stop breaking it

Yo this be a good TTS. Good grammar and plot, But its kinds overwhelming sometimes

hey I know you haven’t updated this fanfic in a long time but please please please continue it I would definitely like to see it continued and I know that a lot of other people would to so if you can then please continue this story.

Sincerely: a concerned reader

Hey I really like this fanfic and I hope that you continue it one day I just wanted to make my support known now have a nice day

I see potential for this Fic
But maybe separating each character’s lines would be wise to avoid confusion
For example, one line has the Emperor’s dialogue, while the next one with a space in between whoever he’s talking to

If I ever ask someone where I am, and they tell me "Earth" I'm going to assume there is something wrong with them. I always hated that in fanfics, it's completely unnatural.
The premise of this story is very interesting though, even if it's a little weirdly paced.

why doesnt he start a pmc? he has the knowhow of 40.000 years of tech he could easily rule the world, that is even without concidering he is a god