Ahhhh I'm so late but this is so fricking cuteeeee I love thissss. And its so well written out too. You're an awesome Writer!

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I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

I enjoyed this a lot.

Short but beautiful. I like it

I love this, never seen a time travel fic where everybody start to remember like this. Magnifico!

great time travel story! I love this! and thank u for writing this.

Ah, but if Hannibal kills Alana, then Margot is DEFINITELY going to be on their asses...! I'm intrigued by all this and how it could go from here, but I also know that it's complete where it stands. Still, a very interesting concept, this backwards time-slip. You did a very good job, I think - well done. :D

That was fantastic, you changed the point of view at all the right times. This has honestly been one of the most interesting one shots I've ever read.

I hope they covered their tracks. So even with Jack plus whomever else knowing they left no proof behind. Hopefully Will and Abigail got the biggest problems out of the way. To bad you ended here. I'd be interested to read what could happen next.

You know, I usually hate time travel stories. But I enjoyed this one greatly.