Oh wow that was totally fabulous! You really can weave a great tale. Thank you for sharing your words - I loved reading them :)

Great twist. I didn’t see it until she said she was sorry.

This wad a great story. I would love to read how vampy Bella and Edward re-establish the world together. Thanks for writing and sharing.

women! sheessh

I did not know this fic existed. Really. I thought I was familiar with most of your work & have read most of it. Clearly, I was wrong.

You are such a gifted writer & have such original ideas. This fic shows that well. I'm glad I stumbled upon it...you mentioned it today on facebook & I thought, "Huh, where did this come from? 2017...really?"

I enjoyed it very much. It's truly something different...short but creates a whole alternate world for Edward & Bella & the gang.

Keep writing! ;)

:-)

Really good

Bella tries to kill Edward but then freaks out because she did? That just so fucking flippant.

I didn't like Alice spilling the beans and honestly it just seemed so unneeded. Shes such a worthless character. And having her human with gifts is just...stupid. It was a lot more believable in twilight because the "gift" made her crazy.

I love it! and as Bella being Boss of the Doomsday Mafia right on! :~) I hope there is more soon

Please don’t stop writing this story. I already love it. Thanks for writing and sharing.

Love it! Thanks for sharing!

This was very interesting. I liked it!

good

Awe. I really line this!'
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This is crazy good.
It's a nice change from the rut I've fallen into reading.