I enjoyed reading this chapter and story. I like the au's too.

I'm happy Ria and Mira are back to being mother and daughter

I really feel like it shouldn't cut off here if you plan on making another story please make it about this I really want to know if Mira finds out that her soul mate is ria

Uhhh... Part 3?

I hope another part of soulmate comes out cause I cried after this chapter

Awesome chapter

Ah, man. The suspense is excruciating, can't wait for part 2.

Okay.. I take back what I said about her asking them to stay. She just did. I wanted to correct that before I forgot. I still stand to what I said though. Ria doesn't seem very... (proactive?) in her care to them. She seemed like missed them when she knew they were leaving. It bothered me how she didn't immediately try to spend time with them, but stuck to Mira and Laxus (once again, I could have missed something).

However, I just wanted to say that I do really enjoy the story. I realise that I've only been saying negatives, but that's because I love this story so much and see so much potential in it.

Not fully sure on the time range of it all (there could've been a gap I didn't pick up on), but it bothers me a bit that Ria is so keen on Fairy Tail and almost dismisses the people that took care of her for years. Besides, if she believed humans were bad for so long, why did that change so suddenly. Ria should've been more apprehensive, but only lean to Mira once her demon side is shown. This then leads to her accepting the guild more as well. The trauma seems rushed. Also, she could've offered that the experiments stayed with the guild, or something, to show she was still attached to them. It bothered me that she didn't show concern for them, other than the one or two nightmares. She didn't ask Cana to help her find them like she did with the orb. They just seemed forgotten, which is unrealistic if that's the only family she's known. I also would've expected her to go off on her own once or twice to find them herself. The experiments seem like an afterthought to both the story and to Ria.

This is the second time I've read this and I enjoyed it yet again. I hope you continue the witch story. The storyline is intriguing. Keep up the great writing!

I like the “nice guy” Laxus it’s odd to see as most people bash him or just let it run out like canon we almost never get to see laxus show this side and it’s super fucking refreshing

I’ve deemed this story binge worthy and I’m finding myself loving it more and more I wish more stories flowed like this one. It has the perfect amount of sad moments along with good happy moments it’s such and amazing read

Kind of a gap here says unblemished skin but wasn’t she covered in bruises and cuts from chains and stuff? Maybe I missed something or she just has a decent healing factor as a side effect of the Fox dna or just more glamour magic?

It’s amazing to see somebody who loves a story so much

This story is good and epic say when you have the time come read my story Fairy tail Phoenix of darkness and leave reviews plz