| Reviews for The Thirteenth Captain |
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   Elizabeth loines chapter 1 . 6/12 Please update |
| wolfgirl232323 chapter 4 . 3/26 Please update if you have time! |
| reaperofages chapter 4 . 10/18/2019 really enjoying so far hope for more chapters soon |
| Scififan33 chapter 4 . 8/17/2019 Really like this! Was kind of hoping for him to make use of being physically a kid and hug at least one of them. Noticed you change from third to first person a lot in this chapter. I look forward to seeing where you take this. Will he get more visitors once it's known he remembers? Are they in gigai? otherwise why ring the doorbell when they had no way to know he could see Shinigami? |
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 4 . 8/16/2019 I really like it |
| trillna99 chapter 4 . 2/24/2019 I wonder how would Snape react if the sickness is truly true |
| NathanB chapter 4 . 2/13/2019 Please PLEASE! Keep updating this, I've seen it pass from user to user, and it has such potential to be an amazing story, take as long as you need, just try to keep the story going |
| kuu.mochizuki.3 chapter 4 . 1/20/2019 this story seems like it is going to be interesting, i look forward to reading more. :3 |
| Kragh chapter 4 . 12/30/2018 Thanks for the chapter. The story was an interesting read and I wonder what you plan to do. Keep it up, Kragh50. PS: Happy new year! |
| Avicat chapter 4 . 12/28/2018 Yes yes yes! YES! Omg im so happy i looooooove it Cant Wait for even moooooooreeeeeee Haha i Love it really so interesting 3 |
| Okay chapter 4 . 12/27/2018 No POV switches, they get annoying an make it difficult to keep up with what the scene is supposed to be. Beyond that, not bad at all. |
| PeytonTempest chapter 4 . 12/28/2018 Thanks so much for the update! I really enjoy this story :) |
| Argonaut986 chapter 4 . 12/28/2018 Things have just become complicated, for versions reasons. |
| LunaraGK chapter 4 . 12/28/2018 This is very good, I look forward to when you upload more. |
| Rythulian124 chapter 4 . 12/27/2018 awesome update! I really enjoy your writing, especially the improved detail and grammar of your version. I feel like Juushiro's actions are better explained and thought out in this fic compared to the other version I have read. I do wonder though if you are going to continue the same way the other story like this went? Or will you deviate from what has been done already. thanks for the update! |
