I have played Breath of the Wild for a while and I am impressed with how written the story. It feels like I am watching the story unfold without playing the game, I am looking forward to more from you in the future.

Man. I read the whole thing, and let me just say, I am impressed! I loved the in-depth character and creative liberties you took with the game.

I get it. Link is not supposed to be "erhmahgerd he's so BADASS," but that doesn't mean making trivial of his own troubles fair. If this is truly Zelda's view of things, it's quite narrow-minded.

What is with this simping? Zelda may be working hard, but Link has also been struggling with his obligations and the Master Sword. The very fact that he can't properly hear it yet is an apt example of that, and that's just from this chapter. This is definitely descriditing Link too easily.

Hello to anyone reading... thank you again for the lovely comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it! With the sequel to BOTW coming out hopefully within the next year or so, I will definitely be writing more fics, and perhaps a Rewritten 2. I will likely not be using this site for it, opting instead for ao3... please find me there or on tumblr under the name botwriter. Thanks again, and happy reading.

This was a beautiful fanfic! Very detailed and logical, and had tons of fun reading it!

This is an amazing story! I loved the realistic progression of ZeLink, and the way you approached Link retrieving his memories - this story is really something special!

I loved this story so much that I'm reading it again.

Shhhhh... do you hear that? Its very faint... hang on... doesnit sound like... a sequel?

Great chapter.

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Enjoying this story so far. This chapter especially. This one made me go 'awww'

So well worded, and follows the game story really nicely with Coolio love bits in it. Thanks for a great story haha

I remember that weird man that you're supposed to meet enable to get into Gerudo Town! He's a little weird...

you're bringing back memories, and thank you for that! :)