Reviews for Dad, Who Are You?
arknox443275 chapter 8 . 3/8/2014
HOW TO MAKE HAGRID SPILL THE BEANS:
Step 1: Get him into Hogsmeade (or sneak into the kicthen)
Step 2: Order a drink... lots of drinks
Step 3: Wait until drunken (but mention question/topic subtly before)
Step 4: Ask question and make sure you get all the info
arknox443275 chapter 3 . 3/8/2014
Rolanda Hooch.
arknox443275 chapter 2 . 3/8/2014
P.S. It's Pomona Sprout, not Georgia
Yemi Hikari chapter 5 . 3/16/2011
Well... on one side, I am interested in finding out what happens to Athena, but on the other, there are such major plotholes it is driving me nuts, not to mention the plot is slow and going practically nowhere. It is way to focused on Athena, instead of balancing it out with canon characters. There are so many OCs running around and not enough time to get to know them...
Yemi Hikari chapter 4 . 3/16/2011
Wait... how can Harry be one of her students when McGonagal's been hiding in the wizarding world. Makes no sense at all. :
Yemi Hikari chapter 3 . 3/16/2011
Shoving the Hogwarts letter into fanfics is just bad writing, just to let you know. And why would Minverva forget how to turn into a cat. It isn't some spell that turns her, she is an animangus. The story is interesting, I'll admit, but the little things, like the believability that M&D could possibly have a daughter as someone pointed out kind of takes away from it.
Yemi Hikari chapter 2 . 3/16/2011
Reading this chapter, I have to ask, why didn't McGonagall tell her daughter sooner. Harry Potter's reason for not knowing was a reason. Protecting her daughter from the truth is not a good reason, nor is not telling her protecting her from Death Eaters. TELLING her would be what would keep her safe.
Yemi Hikari chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
I honestly can't buy into the idea that they need to escape to the Muggle world. If her last name is going to be such a problem, then just change it. If they are worried about her safety, then there are plenty of people to protect her. Then there is the fact that the characters are OoC. Snape is actually sympathizing with the plight is just one example.
sin.nighthawk chapter 15 . 11/2/2006
nice
deegardiner3 chapter 1 . 8/11/2004
awesome
Lisa chapter 15 . 4/5/2003
hey this is a great fanfiction bes i have read in a long while. although you forgot one small detail, you cant disaperate into hogwarts. well done for a great story lisa
Alexial chapter 15 . 3/23/2003
great story! loved the quidditch game! it was great!
Child-of-the-Dawn chapter 15 . 3/22/2003
weeness.

I loved this chapter. Though I'm a R/Hr fan, I still enjoyed it.
Aeryn Alexander chapter 15 . 3/22/2003
Aw ... that was wonderful! The Quidditch game especially. Great story!
lover411 chapter 15 . 3/22/2003
that was great good job i loved it
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