| Reviews for Part of a Family |
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   Cranky Monkey 699 chapter 5 . 5/29 This is great and I’m happy things are going well for you. I hope to see an update soon though |
| draculyn28 chapter 4 . 5/13 Very good story, I hope you continue it at some point, greetings. |
| draculyn28 chapter 5 . 3/8 Very good story, I hope the continues at some point, greetings. |
| Samuel Santillan chapter 5 . 1/14 me gusta debes continuarla sin duda es una buena historia y quiero saber cuano puede dar y debe ser unharem entre naruto erza y mirajane |
| JM of hell chapter 4 . 1/1 Add AU because there are lore problems here. Magic comes from additional organ in humans in Fairy tail world and humans in Naruto world dies if they have no chakra. Also that the "air" around Fiore causes Naruto not be able to use chakra so well is wrong since chakra is something that humans broduce themselfs inside bodys. Also quick point. How come there has never been war between earth land and element nations? how some places on planet has chakra and others don't cause when Hagaromo released chakra to world in cannon it was said that even animals had chakra network. Those things needs to be explained since we can't use canon logic and if they are not explained and makes no sense on canon. then story is simply fold. |
| RunOnSentences chapter 1 . 12/26/2019 Ah yes. Naruto takes a swim and suddenly his chakra, a biological part of his body, disappears. That damn salt water, huh? |
| Sageofchaos chapter 5 . 12/15/2019 hope to read more. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/13/2019 Hope to see anew chapter soon, was kinda bummed when I though this was dead. |
| SoraROCK chapter 5 . 12/13/2019 Been one year and few months... Glad that you is here but I was going look forward for your next chapter, oh well I’m happy your back so welcome back, author-san |
| PkmntrainerCam chapter 2 . 12/13/2019 Kyuubi no Youko/Yoko for future reference. |
| reaver216 chapter 5 . 12/13/2019 Don't you mean we don't want to miss what comes next also I am not trying to be mean but couldn't you have put this with an actual chapter |
| codegreen3333 chapter 4 . 3/23/2019 when is the next chapter this story is awesome |
| Monster King chapter 4 . 2/24/2019 Great job please continue the story |
| dragonfire1222 chapter 2 . 12/31/2018 Don't be sorry! We LOVE long chapters! :D |
| Archer Chef chapter 4 . 12/29/2018 as of right now , the Akatsuki would be no one with the fairy tail guild especially Gilarts , He would be around Pain level but a bit higher and Kisame would be no match for him he would destroy Samehada . I know it's virtually indestructible but most of the older Swords of Mizu are either broken or destroyed. Also Tobi vs Makarov , Tobi wouldn't even match him as of right now lol he is weak without his Kamui. Especially with how they cant use ninjutsu if I remember correctly , so no Kamui spam. Also do a NarutoxErzaXMira and maybe Ultear just to spice things up . :p |
