Rereading these again. I think Jon liked to annoy his little brother knowing he

Please come back

And done! Wow, you did it again. You took me all around, constantly surprising with who they could trust. Loved the amount of NXT people you had thrown into it. I will dig into part 3 as soon as I feel up to it. I can't start a story if I can't finish it in one go so I need another full day and start early in the morning again.

Oh, bloody hell, I was right. Corey, Corey, Corey... tsk tsk!

You are messing with my mind, girl.

Okay, Regal is still a good guy... yet. I really shouldn't review until I'm done, should I? Or maybe take a slight break in reading since I'm reading things wrong? *LOL*

Damn it! Regal? I suck at guessing. I've been so sure it would be Corey through out the last 5 chapters.

And moving on again...

Diving into part 2 today and I wasn't going to review until the end like on the last one but then I came across you actually knowing and using King Diamond and I couldn't move on without commenting on that. Been a King Diamond fan since I was 11 years old and I'm 36 today so you get the point. ;-) So freaking cool that someone else actually knows him in here. Haven't experienced that before. Anyway, moving on with the story...

Great chapter...glad Dean found out the truth and told Roman. Hopefully they will be able to face it together. Waiting for part 3. I love your writing.

i'm sad this is ending but i'm soooo hyped for the part 3. i'm ready for them to fight mean ass people and be such badass boyfriends. AND YES YOU DID AMAZING IN THIS STORY

I must admit I was first skeptical about reading this series but I decided to give it a shot,and I'm glad I did. Your writing is completely different than what I'm used to reading(and it's a good thing). I,too have depression so I know what's like(I read your comments), and I would just like to say that people are gonna be assholes but you've got a new friend in me Keep on writing and I'll look forward to your work
P.S I keep reading part one and two over and over again because it's that damn good.

Yeah leaving Lakeview worked so well for them before...

Good ending

That's why Dean wasn't able to fight off the evilness of the necklace when he wore it...the evil in him mAkes him extremely violent towards Roman...

Hmmmm...I kinda want Dean to embrace his evil within him to actually fight off Mark and Seth...and I think that's where it's going...

Basically gonna be good vs evil fight for Dean's soul...

This will be good!

the chapter 38 made me kinda sad. roman was soooo in love with dean :( i'm glad they ended up together. and i'm sosososo glad roman woke up. AND THE CHAPTER 39 BLEW MY MIND. whew that was insane (but in a good way) i'm ready for the next story.

also i hope you feel better soon 3

aww sorry your in the hospital hope you get better or recover soon dont let people bring you down your an amazing writer tgus series is amazing cant wait for the next one

I hope you feel better.
Wow...it is coming full circle...i hope this does not change anything between Roman and Dean. Now I see why Seth did what he did. But Jon wanted to marry for love and he found his soulmate in Leakee. I wonder what Mark is up to and if it is still the plan. Wonder what Roman is going to think.

Vermilion pt 3 is a good title

Such a great chapter. Glad Roman got up. The old man was leading him back to Dean. Thanks for the update. I hope you feel better. Can't wait to see what happens next.