| Reviews for Within The Dome |
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Sabastu chapter 4 . 6/28/2017 It was a pretty fun chapter. xD Never imagined them like noodles. Hope Lucy and Levy can help them. xD Pretty nice idea, I can see everyone (except Jellal) IC. For me he's maturd type and not childish type as Gray and Natsu. But still, is just my opinion. You'are doing a great job. NwN Thanks 4 writing! PS: Sorry about english mistakes, not my first language. |
Sabastu chapter 3 . 6/28/2017 Lol. Natsu and company are complete circus. xDD Like the quick bond, hope to know more about Lucy, that part was to plain. I mean, she and her brother just saw eachother again and didn't have a real interaction. D: |
Sabastu chapter 2 . 6/28/2017 Nice plot. Like how Erza seems emotionless but still is kind and protective. Proud of Jellal for fighting too. |
Sabastu chapter 1 . 6/28/2017 (("You're still straight, Jellal, you're still straight.")) Totally ROLF! xD (("Wait a minute⦠you're a girl!")) Yep, you still straight, Jellal. xD ((He remembered someone say those same exact words to him 400 years ago.)) OMG! Everything and everyone he knew has gone. QwQ |