Leí las novelas hace unos días porque una amiga me las pasó en español y dios, mi corazón quedó destrozado...Pero Este fic tomó los pedazos, lo pisoteó y luego los volvió cenizas... ;-;

Me parece acertado que el apodo de "Nines" haya sido puesto por ella y el crea que sus amigos le dicen así :'c
También como gradualmente sus sentimientos terminan aflorando, tiene sentido que 2B siga viviendo para mantener su recuerdo, realmente yo si creo que 9S pueda recuperar sus recuerdos como cuando vimos en el ataque a sus memorias una foto del suicidio doble en la fabrica para detener a los Goliah o cuando se está muriendo y recuerda su reencuentro en la fabrica ;ñ; ¡Quiero ser optimista!

En fin: ¡Amé cada parrafo de este escrito!

Saludos ;3

saddening

What an amazing story

Thank you for the good read. Character studies like this are always enjoyable when executed right. If you have any more Automata fics planned, I’m excited to read them.

Extremely well written. I could actually feel the distress and bitterness that 2B was constantly feeling throughout each log. I really hope that these 2 will be able to find Salvation someday.

Why! (ToT) Why do you keep doing this to me!?

Once again the writing is exquisite. The tragedy of the cycle of life and death 2B and 9S go through is horrible and your stories really convey that strongly, perhaps more than the game does. Seriously, the end of this chapter just destroyed my heart. Your characterization of these two is really great. Keep up the good work. The grammar and general storytelling is excellent.

And the painful moments hit deep. You are really good at delivering the anguish.

Damn this was good. very well written as well. u have a great grasp of the characters. I love how subtle but emotional u made 2b. amazing this had me in my feelings again just like after finishing the game for the first time great job!

Wonderful story! It captured the bleakness of their relationship very well. I definitely could feel 2B's pain. Very well-written from a technical standpoint also.