great work.

When will your next Story be up?

it's impossible for everyone in five countries to fit in one country

How many babies came from this and it was on porpouse
The babies part?

I would love to see Naruto going to country to country to see their babies and have sex with their mothers

Good story not sure why Hinata name shows up in Sakura's part at the end.

This was a good first fanfic. Keep it up.

Sakura-hime lol. See ya

The truth is this story would have been better if you had used Hinata instead of Sakura in it. The way you wrote it fits Hinata much better than it does Sakura.

That was pretty good for your first fanfic! I have no idea if you take requests or not but a story with the main couples (NaruSaku,SasuHina,SaiIno,ShikaTema,NejiTen) at a swingers party would be awsome!

It's clear that this is not your "first story" considering you stole this from darkchild316. You didn't even attempt to hide it well, by the way. Plus you forgot to swap Hinata's name for Sakura's in two instances.

Don't be a thief, make your own story.

the reason Hinata was at the end was because I was watching Naruto and Hinata's marriage while watching it forgot to change it. And SEELE01 The reason it's liked that is because it's a fanfic you can do anything except claim something thats not yours

I can't shake the feeling that some thing is fishy here. Like that Sakura was never supposed to be in this story but rather it was originally written with Hinata in her place. It is as if someone used the "Find" function to look for and replace Hinata with Sakura. Except not all instances were replaced. Not to mention Sakura in this story seems to have Hinata's body. I love Sakura but I wouldn't describe her as having huge breasts. So I can't help but believe that not everything about this is on the up and up .

Why do you have Hinata blow a kiss at the end when she is no where in site throughout the whole story.

Naruto sure is one lucky man.