This story holds a lot of potential, but you need to work on your grammar and spelling, punctuation, pronouns, adverbs, adjectives, and verbs, the lack of these things makes your story difficult to read, but your concept is good.

Also, you need to break the scenes up, you seem to go from one scenario to the next, sometimes in the same paragraph, again this makes it difficult to read. Different scenes should not only have a different paragraph, but they should also have line breaks. You can do this by placing a row of "-" or "_" between the scenes, and it would also help to label them, for example...

-With Naruto/Naruto's House/10 Minutes Later-

This makes it easier for people to follow your story, but your concept is very unique and interesting, your Sacred Gear is original and a unique concept, you could even go with tying it to both Ophis or Fafnir, both are serpentine dragons with the latter being a 'World Eater'. The idea of Naruto helping people has been done before, but it works as a plot tool, but I would recommend changing up the interactions with these people, one, they ALL seem suicidal, and two of them were both basically pimped out. You should mix it up, have him help out a few drug addicts, make a couple of the prostitutes actual willing prostitutes, don't make them all the same cliche, it's not only boring, but a bit demeaning, some people in those situations made their choice but sometimes it's because they just don't care or they were left with limited options. For example, not every prostitute you'll meet has some sort of sob story and some are just as much whores as the're made out to be, this doesn't make them bad, prostitution is a quick and easier but risky way of making money, but the fact remains some people chose the profession, just as a drug dealer chose to deal drugs, not all of these people come from broken homes, some simply made the wrong choice.

You should also give Naruto a little more emotion and make his assisting people more believable, him lending an ear to someone is believable, him helping out in a soup kitchen is believable, him prescribing medications to people is NOT believable, the cops, especially in Japan, would shut his ass down in a heartbeat.

Man most them rappers aint got no bars go listen to sum mozzy, savii or sum 1 else lmfao

While the idea of a Naruto with a Gorgon's abilities interests me, you put to many things for me to see this as a successable story.
Personally the thought of Naruto pairing with Asia doesn't seem right to me. I see them closer to siblings roles, for their pairing to work they would have to be closer in age, OR the plot would have to be extremely well thought out but by putting so many girls my interest colaspses.
Theres also the fact that Sona seems the more viable, AND LOGICAL, choice to recruiting Naruto. With again the harem choices making everything seem... distorted!?
Theres the way you seem to insist in stating what kind of bike Naruto's riding but not discribing it.
You even started calling Naruto a tattoed teen, yet a no point before was there any mention of a tatto. Your sentences also need improvment, there are many points in where I had to double back because I could no longer understand what I was reading.
Also WHY DOES SONA HAVE FENRIR (from Norse mithology), of al choices, as a familiar!?
And another thing, it appears that you were going with the greek mithos aproach, which I'll admit left me a bit confused. Acording to what my understanding Medusa was greek priestess for Athena (greek goddess), thath was raped by Poseidon in the temple for said goddess. Athena instead of saving, helping or even showing any form of support for her priestess's pleas, cursed medusa, transforming her into a creature whose hair is composed of snakes and whose eyes turns all who look ,directly, at it to stone. There's also on and off, mostly on, statments that sugest a snake lower half. Thus shes a Gorgon. There's even statements of her having Gorgon sisters. Finally we have legends about her being decapitated by Perseus, thus raising the questions... If Naruto is the descendant of a Gorgon!Medusa then who is the other side of that formula? Do the members of the familly know about Gorgon blood that apparently runs in theyre veins?
Overall I sugest you either; A) Overhaul your story or B) Scrap it and start from the beginning.
If your really insistent on having all of your choices then you can follow the example of other authors write multiple similar stories with slight deviations in content. Like in one Sona choses Naruto over Issei, in another Naruto is aproached by both Rias and Sona, in another he knows that his famillys is descendent from Medusa...
there was a moment when you reveal Naruto's Sacred Gear where I thought you where going to give him that petrification glove from the Moon Kingdom movie but... Yeah.
Anyway, Good Luck!

Please don't let this be another fic where the author gets super picky over who lives and who dies in the Fallen Angel arc using their looks for the reasoning...

Sure, you changed Raynare's personality right off the bat instead of having her make a sudden personality change, so good for that. If you kill off both Kalawarner and Mittelt, I understand. If you kill off Kalawarner and spare Mittelt, I'm fine with that. But if you kill off Mittelt and spare Kalawarner, this story goes down the route a lot of low quality DxD fics on this site go. There are too many fics where Raynare and Kalawarner are the ones who get spared, just because they're large breasted women.

I mean, they were all depicted as cruel, but in different ways. Raynare was a generic Disney villain. Mittelt was pretty much a cocky brat in severe need of discipline. Kalawarner was more of an abusive alcoholic. Fun fact, the official DxD game indirectly confirms that Kalawarner was an alcoholic.

My point is, when it goes to Kalawarner and Mittelt, please think about the story in the long run when you're thinking about what you're doing to do with them.

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Just gonna throw this out there but it's senpai not sempai also you said Naruto and Sona are in the same grade so senpai doesn't work here

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Buen capitulo esperp prox pronto

I had been so excited that I did not see that

His sacred gear sounds wicked. Nice battle with Dohnaseek. Kushina's over protected-ness is quite funny. I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!

Cant wait for more.

Great chapter looking forward to more

Good chapter keep it up

the minimum age for getting a drivers lisence is 18 in Japan ...

Please continue
Can’t wait for more