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Escriben que todos en la aldea odian a Naruto porque de alguna manera el autor debe volver a Naruto un paria aunque no tenga el más mínimo sentido, para luego darle los powerups, en este fic de la típica paliza de los aldeanos donde después encuentra a alguien que lo entrene y le dé poderes fue el ataque de sus hermanos.

You dont have to have chakra to be affected by chakra. In fact you use chakra to disrupt genjutsu. Which means unless he gains a method he not only CAN be affected by genjutsu but can't do anything to free himself from it.

I dont understand the appeal to writing neglect fictions. They never make any damn sense either.

I mean seriously, you watch the episode where they die a shitty death and Kushina is heartbroken saying goodbye to Naruto and wishing him the best. Then people suddenly think it's a great idea to write a story where she and Minato are heartless and / or stupid people who neglect Naruto?

Always for incredibly stupid reasons at that. Even with the destiny crap. The sheer level of neglect, actions, and inactions that are always written make no sense. That for some reason they can train 2 kids but not a third.

That they cant find someone else to train him despite being Hokage. That during non training time when sitting at the table eating, playing, going out for dinner, going out to shop or anything else somehow him not being the destined one means they can't bring him along?

Even if the argument is made that the other or others need to be focused on for training it has absolutely nothing to do with their downtime. They aren't ALWAYS training.

Out of curiosity, if he was neglected to the ridiculous degree that he has no bed and is never fed. Then how the hell did he survive his earliest years without dying? Before he could crawl and move around?

Kushina breastfed him and made sure he didnt freeze or starve to death till he could move around and then just left him on the floor somewhere to survive on his own ignoring his crying as soon as he could crawl? Is that what this chapter is saying?

That apparently everyone ignored him including even Anko. I'm really not understanding the point of every single person being against him and seeing him as worthless for not being a jinchuuruki when no one else is and nearly all of them don't have a clan or anything either. It's rather ridiculous.

Why is Tsunade and other Jonin calling a child worthless?

And why the hell are the parents suddenly confused with their son Menma calling Naruto a loser?

Please don't tell me they're somehow completely unaware they've never paid any attention to Naruto. That's literally impossible. Especially if he lives there as shitty as it may be.

I'm actually reading the chapter and pausing to comment before backing out to continue reading. If my commenting seems confusing the reason is I'm commenting on each section I'm reading and wondering how any of it is supposed to make sense.

How does Hiruzen not know Naruto exists when Naruto pointed out he has seen him at their own home. Which means he should've seen the red haired obvious Uzumaki. Why is he surprised?

Naruto was also pointed out to be the black sheep that everyone knows about and is why none of the Jonin were willing to train him and think he is useless for whatever stupid reason. So how the hell does Gai, Hirizen, Mikoto and so on not even know he exists?

Again why would he be looked down on or hated? Do the clan members of Uchiha or others who dont become ninja because they don't want to or focus on something like business get looked down on? What is this.

Sige con la historia

Fanfic trash

Que mierda es está...26 putos capítulos y nunca se vengo nunca hizo nada en contra de Konoha y todo el puto tiempo habla sobre venganza y pudo generar un plan o simplemente acabar con ella lentamente y alargó todo de forma estúpida es dios yo creí que Naruto tendría como objetivo conseguir la paz permanente o algo por el estilo es dios mierda y actúa como un retrasado mental y en lugar de hacerlo solo está perdiendo en tiempo uniendose como shinobi hechandose aire en las pelotas *literalmente* :v además de que siento que solo te enfócaste en el Narutoverso cuando mencionaste que hay muchos más y poniendo las mismas tramas como la de Zabuza o algunas mal improvisadas y además de que este Naruto está mal escrito es más creo que su personalidad y comportamiento no va con toda la mierda que sufrió en la infancia y actúa como un idiota además de que lo más gracioso que me parece aquí es que mencionaste todos los acontecimientos canónicos que ocurrieron y que fueron una mierda cuando esta historia también es igual de mierda es decir en sus inicios Naruto presentaba lo que significa ser un ninja perdón de una manera diferente y la historia de un retrasado mental que huele a mierda pero sin importar que tipo de problemas haya pasado los superó con fuerza de voluntad pero en shippuden cambiaron todo eso con la aparición de los marcianos albinos y el viejo de mierda que creería que era sabio y no pudo corregir a su hijo mayor la historia del chakra y toda esa mierda de las reencarnaciones los powerups rotos y lo más frustrante aquí es leer toda una explicación compleja de sus poderes y habilidades digo tantos capítulos y sigue explicando más mierda que no se entiende

Sigueeeeee

hola señor escritor desde hace un mes e querido comentar su historia pero no lo hacia porque no habia llegado hasta aqui queria decir que es una historia muy buena y queria hacerte una petición o al menos que lo considere nose como decirlo pero quisiera que hiciera una escena nose de minato e hizanagi haciendo y que minato diga algo asegurando que no pasara en fin para no hacerte bolas quiero que a minato le salga un mono del trasero ya que dijo que izanagi se vengaria quisiera ver eso XD gracias por su atencion UWU

Nashkuro

Tu historia es mierda para que lo pones a entrenar a un dios si a cada rato se puede morir puto

Estupideses

Este capitulo es increíble no puedo esperar a ver como sera la relación entre tobi i naruto. El fic es fantastico, sigue asi, animos!

Jajjajaa

Si referencia a asura's war