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just read it all good work i am gana read the rewight

Oh okay then can’t wait take care

I come back once every few months to read this again.
it's a nice story

Well she totally crossed into Mary Sue territory. The story kinda deteriorated when Kabuto first ditched her with Yamato and co and she was brought to Konoha.

hey, new fan here, um, you left on a gigantic cliff hanger and I do not appreciate it! I flew through this story, I usually hate like, really world OC inserts but this one is actually really good! I really hope you update soon though I'm sure it'll be a long while if at all.I really wish she wouldnt try to alter anything because I feel like so many things could change if she does, which she know understands. I love the Eastern and Western type talk. love how she's full of flaws and things like that, it makes her so relatable. please please please update omg lol

"I promise I won't go a month withouth updating" she said, "I will update soon" she said ;-;
Pd: I love this fic 3

Oh gosh lmao, now to meet the insane father XD

LOL Orochimaru's so chill about this...I like that XD
Get used to Kabuto's 'just had sexy hair' Orochimaru, you'll be seeing it a lot more v

Nice lime~ XD
Lmao Kabuto showing up to a meeting with 'after sex hair' and Orochimaru's reaction, I swear I love this X'D

Marie is so considerate! QvQ
Loving the direction this is going in, also I'm loving her sense of humor XD
Keep it up~

Omg lmao, Kabuto's making it hot in there XD

Oh gosh I love this so far!
Kabuto is one of my fav characters and I'm so glad I stumbled across this today!
This seems interesting, keep it up~ w

Sasuke's hair is more like a duck's butt!

Noooooo! She is enjoying Gai and might become a female version of him (shuddering) my gosh I hope not and yay you return! We miss you so much!